A Thousand Words

A Thousand Words

A Poem by LunarSong
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Just read it :)

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They say a picture
Is worth a thousand words.
Perhaps that saying
Strikes a chord.

But let me paint you a picture,
With my words fair,
An image dark and brooding
But as light as air.

Every picture has a hidden story,
Every fairy-tale does too,
Even though words expound 
Still read between the lines, will you?

Golden light filters through
The emerald leaves high up.
By the gurgling brook the maiden
Drinks with her crystal cup.

Her clothes are simple,
But her skin seems to glow.
Her brown hair's plain,
Yet dances while the wind blows.

How she came to drink from crystal
Is almost a mystery.
The whole world seems to sing
At how one so fair lives so simply.

The bees are humming softly
Drinking sickly sweet nectar,
Enjoying the vibrant wild flowers.
A breathtaking scene for any spectator.

The sun is on the part of it's journey
Where the sky is almost red.
Shadows have started falling,
And creatures start preparing for bed.

A laugh rests on the maiden's lips
A song around her lies,
Which melody her voice imparted
And never dies.

Hidden in the dark shadows
The maiden's "prince" stands
The sight of her stole his breath,
"Go," the wind demands.

He's dressed as plain as she is,
But his brow marks him a king.
There's a smile in his eyes,
His lips ready to sing.

There's an odd thing in his hand,
Two delicious, juicy orange spheres.
With one last long look
Finally he nears.

And now my picture advances,
The maiden sees her "prince."
They eat the wondrous fruit
And in the river rinse.

The water's as clear as her glass,
Cool and refreshing
The brook and wind sound so happy,
Just like the maiden and her new ring.

The sun's light hits it,
A pretty glistening silver band
The couple admire it
As her prince kisses her hand.

The maiden refills her goblet,
Solemnly bids him to drink.
Refusal he has not in mind
(He can hardly think!)

It's said happines comes to those
Who from the clear crystal drink-
False or true I know not-
So to his lips he placed it's brink.

The water quenches his thirst,
Fills his soul with hope.
Though pasts may be troubling
There's no reason to mope.

The sun is now setting,
They patiently await the stars.
Bright Venus will show first
And maybe they'll see Mars.

They both make a wish
On the first twinkling star to appear.
Full of perfect bliss
Together they calmly stare.

Under Orion's watchful plight
The maiden and her prince lay,
The are promised to each other
Neither can wait 'till May

As the bright moon rises
They painfully stretch their legs
And make their way back
Though "stay" the forest begs.

Under Diana's bright silver light
They tread the trampled, worn path.
Through the trees is seen
Their town, in preparation for an enemy's wrath.

A scout comes running, salutes them both.
"Themus," he addresses the maiden's prince
"We can expect them at dawn."
He says with a slight wince.

The maiden's prince is no more,
The sober warrior returns.
His expression becomes grim
The light in his eyes burns.

Knowledge shines in his eyes
Gained from trial and pain.
The maiden stares in his earnest eyes
With a grim smile, it starts to rain.

He studies his maiden, his virgin
"Samay, go home, get some sleep,"
He says, as a commander to soldier
And her lover still to keep.

She nods her head,
With some farewells,
Makes her way home
Where her family dwells.

She holds herself tall,
Accustomed to strife.
Though who knows if they'll make it,
She and who she was to wife.

"Father," she says evenly,
"The scout says they'll arrive at dawn."
Her father surveyes her gravely,
Then does his best to stiffle a yawn.

"Then we shall prepare for battle.
There will be no rest this night."
He turns to his four sons
Dimly lit in the candle light.

They all fetch their weapons,
Make haste to sharpen their swords,
While Samay polishes her bow,
All with out a word.

Rest is far from their minds,
They've been preparing for days
But there is still far to much
To prepare for what the future lays.

Samay takes her crystal cup,
She holds it in the candle light,
Carefully studying it from every angle.
It was said to save them tonight.

The goblet was created
In an ancient kingdom's towers,
There's many legends surrounding it
Many tales about the goblet's powers.

When the war came
The elders saw it as a last chance
To save their village
And win this dance.

They sent the two best warriors
To retrieve it from the dark
And bring it back
To make hope spark

Samay had been chosen
For her fighting skills and her quick wit
And also brave Themus
Who never would quit.

It was frot with dangers
But they were brave and fought couragously
And arrived home victors
But not yet happily.

They became betrothed,
A light in the dark,
In the pouring rains
A buoyant ark.

But she doesn't know what to do,
What was the point of it all
If she can't figure it out?
The still might fall.

She takes a deep breath,
Closes her blue eyes,
Clears her mind
Removes all ties.

She doesn't know what dawn will bring
She doesn't know the cost,
But the future's never as grim
As it seems when you're first lost.

She looks up and smiles,
The chalice will bring hope.
No battle's easily lost
When you grasp on the rope.

The battle makes it's way to them,
But her aim's true,
She raises the chalice high
And suddenly she knew.

It would give her loved ones courage
It would give her strength
It would turn her enemies around
And cause them to flee a length.

The tides turn in their favor
Soon the battle's won.
Relief shines on faces,
Familiar faces lit by the sun.

Here I find an end
And leave you to compare.
Please don't find me impertinent
To leave no image here.

Picture worth a thousand...


© 2013 LunarSong


Author's Note

LunarSong
Hope you like it, yes it is exactly 1,000 words, which was harder than I thought. It would've been better if I wrote it for a certain picture I know, sorry. Please tell me what you think, critics are welcome as long as it's helpful :P

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I love your poem, it seems absolutely pulchritudinous. The length didn't discourage me at all! I actually engaged myself with the characters, like with a story. It's like... poetry? Except I love it? What is this madness!? My world is upside down. 🙃

Posted 7 Years Ago


LunarSong

7 Years Ago

Hmm, my go to bed was not supposed to sound rude or anything, I'm just a huge supporter of sleep. Ju.. read more
Xandar_The_Zenon

7 Years Ago

I don't think anyone would confuse you for a baby. Not even you are that short 😉 Also, this is go.. read more
LunarSong

7 Years Ago

Well, one of my new roommates is a baby. She just turned 18 a few days ago. I don't know what to say.. read more
I LOVE this story in the poem!!! When I first saw 1000 words I was thinking "That'll take FOREVER to read!" It was well worth the 5 minutes though! I loved the prince! He was my favorite!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Starscraper

11 Years Ago

Hahaha I did! You should be proud.
LunarSong

11 Years Ago

Thank you, ;)
Starscraper

11 Years Ago

You're welcome!
What a simple but clever idea for a poem - to write to the adage 'a picture is worth a thousand words'
and I bet it was a challenge too. But you have done this beautifully. Nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


LunarSong

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Wow. I thought it was awesome till I found out it had a thousand words. Then I thought it was Wondrous! Great job! :) ;) Keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


LunarSong

11 Years Ago

We're talking about talking about nothing ;)
Calibaster

11 Years Ago

Well, at least that's something.
LunarSong

11 Years Ago

I guess it is.
Wow, it's been such a long time since I've read one of your poems and you surprise me every time I do! I love the way you crafted this vivid tale with flowing words and brilliant rhyme. It's very different from your usual style (at least to me), but I loved it all the same! Please let me know when you have another poem ready!

Thank you for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


LunarSong

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it. Yeah this one took me a long time to do. I'll let you know ;)

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