Mobile phone

wave interaction in pink

THE "SHOW-NOT-TELL"-PHONE

 

 

This is my lovely cell phone,
brand-new and full of grace,
with jingle-jangle ring tone
and multicolored face.

 

It's called a Virgin Mobile,
the G-spot glowing pink,
with sexy slimline profile
and silver metal link.

 

(I finger zero, four, four, seven,
eight, five, four, three and double one
to hear that voice straight out of heaven
which activates my bubble-gun.)

 

When wandering the keyboard
the body handles well,
and ringing up my He-Lord -
Vibrations!  - can you tell?

 

"Hello and what a pleasure
to hear your gentle voice
caress these ears at leisure
and stroke them soft as toys."

 

The electronic interface
gives signals out galore
while keeping rhythm and in pace
there's trading at the door.

 

It's pulling every button
and pushing every cue.
With volume up whilst chatting,
the 'handsfree' flashes blue.

 

Bright numbers glow on Virgin's head,
white icons in her eyes.
Let's play no wake-up melody . . . instead
play  HYPNOTISE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

And all my inhibitions fly . . .
(You sound so young and handsome.)
Reception? Brilliant. Thanks to Sky,
and Bell and Richard Branson.

 

And would not bell Bell, Alexander
for the sweet ring of belle-a-donna,
which whistle/belletrist commander
would shun a bell in fide bona?

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This is my lovely cell phone,
the cost is, oh, so small :
less than a cup of coffee grown
at Starbucks for one call !

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Crazy Cat Man]

this is very cute and very original :) I enjoyed reading this

[Flo_writer]

First i just want to say get rid of the first format or put the 2nd one first. The first format is all over and it messed up the flow for me. I almost didn't read the 2nd one but was completly gald I did. Very creative work of art. You must really love that phone. I enjoyed the subject and the effort you made to ryhme. I wouldn't have had so many things to say about a phone. Great job here. I also enjoyed the subtle sexually comparisons.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

When wandering the keyboard
the body handles well,
and ringing up my He-Lord -
Vibrations! - can you tell?

,...............a good write. I like this poem. with regards

[Bare trees]

Clever and entertaining. The second formatting seems better to me.