oblivion

you wont know when it's coming

but you will know when its here

don't look back

i can here it calling

oblivion will take you 

and no one will remember

the you, you once were

if you get sucked in

no one can stop it

oblivion is inevitable

it's dark

and lonely

but don't worry

no one will remember

not even you

Reviews

[Mike Wolfe]

I love this chant style poem. Beating one message into the reader's head over and over and over again. A brilliant way to leave an impression. I love your style and your use of emotion. You did everything extremely well, I am impressed. Happy writing!