Absolve me

If ever my sight hath the power to dazzle you

Absolve me, set me free

 If ever my name hath reigned your ears with delight

Allow me to mirth over this dearth

For not you nor I could belong to a world of lust and long

Forgive me

Forgive my soul for I was just a doltish girl, unwary of the cost I must recompense

Absolve me

Absolve my soul for I have damned yours in every aspect I have known

Childishly I have drown you every dawn

But I beg you not to become I

I beg you to differ

If love was enough

Don't spit on me

Don't let me down

 For I may be cursed but you are cure

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

I like the way you have expressed your emotions, perfectly translating it into words but the lay-out is a bit overwhelming. I recommend to make use of line break, for it makes one poem more readable and more enjoyable for other readers but this poem lacks no emotion, talent and brilliance for I really liked it.

Good job :D

[norajesus]

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback. And yeah I am new to this, I will do that once I'm home. Thanks again! ♡

[Nightfeather]

No problem. You will have a great time here on Writerscafe. The community is really warm and many people give good constructive feedback :)