I Am Empty

I am made of glass.

Easy to see through, easy to Break.

I am supposed to be full.

My purpose is forgotten, my purpose is Unfulfilled.

There is nothing within me.

I am filled with air, I am filled with Emptiness.

Reviews

[Rei Cn]

Short and simple but totally relatable. There comes those times when you feel like you're lost, like you're not exactly unhappy, but it's​ as if nothing matters at the moment. You managed to describe it in few creative words.

[barleygirl]

I think many people feel this way much of the time, but we go on hiding this fragility under whatever cover we are inclined to display. Good imagery with a sense of determination & resignation (strange contrast, but very realistic).

[Dave]

You stimulate some serious thought with your brevity. Good going!

Take care -Dave

[QueenShay]

Love this poem. It hit home for me

[mae23]

Thank you for the review.

[bella]

It's beautiful so much to take in and so much said in very few words

[jazzymars]

Nice one. Less words but meaningful.
...
"What can I do for you that is fine
To help you get out from emptiness
Should I pour you some dazzling wine
To bring you a glass of happiness "

[mae23]

That's really beautiful is that from something you wrote?
And thank you!

[jazzymars]

No Mae, I just construct it to answer your poem.. I just love answering poems or sometimes making the continuation on my own understanding. You like it? It's for you. :D

[mae23]

Yes its very nice!

[jazzymars]

Then, Thank you... And By the way, which flavor to prefer? :D