IT

Wingless, it flies

Mouthless, it mutters

Voiceless, it cries

Flightless, it flutters

Mindless, it creeps

Fearless, it burns

Restless, it sleeps

Brainless, it yearns

Soulless, it stares

Heartless, it hates

Faceless, it scares

Timeless, it waits

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and thoughts. You made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[mae23]

Thank you for the review!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Mae.

[Carol Cashes]

Wonderfully written. Lends itself to more than one interpretation, and I like that.

[mae23]

Thank you so much!

[Daniealla]

This is an Amazing piece, keep it up

[mae23]

Thank you!

[CMC]

I really like the paradoxes you used to write this one. I like to think of the "it" being mentioned as temptation because I think it fits well (correct me if I'm wrong), and it most heavily resonates with "Fearless, it burns," and "Brainless, it yearns." Excellently penned.

[mae23]

Thank you! And yes that works, I wasn't thinking of that while writing but when thinking that while reading it does make a lot of sense