Masstrojans Thrashopen

Mass trojans thrash open,
mass trojans lap moisten.
Yodel model, for this golden throtle.
Creep, don't back up-into me.
I got the trees, feelin' that breeze.
Slip easy like before the bearded child ran,
ran up a hill kick'n screaming.
Coyotes cuddling each other massicly,
fantastically.
Freeze the rays and the leaves every light show,
show me how the universe travels.
Crack pipes and razor blades.
Knitting for both, knitting for two,
but only one is knitting.
And failing.
THEN the mass trojans will enter,
like they never left(the cacklin' banter in a cave of succlents)

Reviews

[wolfshrew]

this was an impressive collection of words, you definitely seem to
have your own voice and I cannot wait to read other things of yours.

[Annie29]

Nice.
I like the internal rhyme (:

[atom]

awesome flow, its totally visceral at first but then I read it again and it changes. The line "Slip easy like before the bearded child ran, ran up a hill kick'n screaming." is amazing.