Wherever you go.

 

Where ever you go,

Whatever you do,

My memories will always follow you.

It’s something you can't erase,

The power of my love you need to praise.

Your entry in my life stopped my every pain,

I want to feel your presence with me time and time again.

Oh! Can't you see my baby!

How you made me so crazy.

I really love you not because you love me too,

But I love you because your love is so true.

Where ever you go,

Whatever you do,

My memories will always follow you.

Author's Note

Another poem written for my sweetie! Love you ><

Reviews

[Dani California]

This also reminded me of "Every Breath You Take" by Sting. I was thinking of it even before reading Robin's review. ...

This is a great poem.. and sad. I can't help but think that this is someone who has died speaking. I'm not sure why it took me there, but I envisioned death and the person who passed on's soul following the one who grieves for them... the one who loved them, while whispering this to them. Truly a heartbreaking thought...

Very nicely done!

[poetic soul]

its sounded like the Sting song....truly beautiful and pure!!

:) Love,
Krishna

[Shelby Taylor]

Loved it hope to see more like this

[Together]

I dont know why but I found it sad, sorry If I'm wrong

[Angel's Lady]

It reminds me, the title at least, of Bubbly by Colbie Caillat. I like this very much. Good job.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2PWfB4lurT4

[Laura E. Aranda]

the only thing needed in the this one is a couple of commas here and there.....otherwise it is a fun read and once again i can feel it is laced with bitter sadness and regrets....cheers, lea

[Roxy]

wow! beautiful!!

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful and lyrical! Just love the joyful feeling, the hope of all that love can be! Wonderful words!!!

Craig

[robin]

I like the effect of not only the repeated phrase but the font structure makes the line feel uttered in this moment as we read it. Great effect! Like "Every Breath You Take"...