When you're gone!

A Jorio

 

Don't laugh at me,

Let me cry alone.

Bleed my heart out,

As you're already gone!

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

sad and sweet at the same time..
AWesome work..keep writing!!!

[Michael X]

heartbreak in abstraction set to the beating of teardrops against one's own understanding of love, life and living. wow. powerfully done. great job!

[poetic soul]

:'( thats sad........really..... and true....

[darkgurl]

I can feel this, really well said and so emotional.....Kim

[Together]

Oh dear! it is so sad, reminds me of that song by Avril lavigne

[Laura E. Aranda]

what is a jorio?

[Laura E. Aranda]

I LOVE SHORT READS
Cheers to you
I know it is sad but it is short and easy to read
ny favorite

[Roxy]

Ah! beautiful!!

[Innocent]

So sad :(
great one!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I can sense the feel of pain and suffering in your write.
Awesome work!