I Pretend

A Jorio

 

 

I started to pretend,

Since love never ends.

I left to pretend,

As nothing's ever went

 

Reviews

[deeps]

short but well said
like this straight to the point

[Vaishali..^_^]

small but so beautiful...!!^_^

[poetic soul]

emotions are at its best here.. loved this!! :)

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[nostal]

Small but wondeful.

[darkgurl]

Well said in just a few words, this is so wonderful....Kim

[Together]

It is not always nice to pretend but thats what life is all about.

[Roxy]

You re very talented writer dear!

[Innocent]

Beautiful!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This is beautifully sad...
and it actually speaks too much..very powerful write!