Just a love note

We all have a dark and a light side. Love will trigger both.

You made this
word lover
finally get
her dreams awake

packed eternities
cracked open
and spilled in fantasies

Till the shadows fall,
and the lights
shine out loud,
may we be loved

Reviews

[Esteban Morfín]

"...Love will trigger both", I'll cite you on that.

[Moonie]

Read this one again because I have already read all your posted poems. Methinks you need to start uploading your beautiful poetry again, friend!
Greatly missed you, and hope you come back soon!

[Sami Khalil]

"packed eternities
cracked open
and spilled in fantasies

Till the shadows fall"

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Love this pragmatic joting. Reminiscent of a fresh blossom opening with the morning's first light. I will savor the fresh aroma, and think of you.

[Daydreamer]

Loveeeeeeee this😍 made my month

[Rana]

Brings synethesia, in the second stanza- pictures of some sparkling purple potion in a vial, bubbling and fizzy, the essence is ecstatic. Your words are like chemicals. Making beautiful reactions. They're eloquent, it's so easy to love them. Through the lights, through the dark, may we be loved, amen, xoxoxo.

[Daydreamer]

How sweet and kind of you!!!😍😍😍 you made my day with your words, much grateful💜 please send me read requests

[Rana]

[Patricia]

nicely done, it's been a while since I read something so sweet. "may we be loved".......yes I wish this for you.

[Daydreamer]

Thank you for always supporting me since day 1 here💜 i miss you so muchh

[Patricia]

You are welcome and yes sorry for always being disappearing but life has kept me from many people and the things I enjoy. Hopefully summer will allow me to be a bit more available and blow in muses. Keep writing!

[Daydreamer]

I love you♥♥♥♥

[Zoya]

Lovely use of words! 'Packed eternities', 'spilled fantasies'...all results of solid imagery. You're quite the thinker. Loved it!

[Daydreamer]

Thats so kind of you!! Thaaanks 😍

[Jennie Baron]

Powerful words. I like that you emphasize love not just for one person or a couple but for everyone. Great writing that truly helps the reader awaken fantasies!

[Daydreamer]

Very grateful for your kindness and support❤

[Moonie]

Love the last line...how you address this love letter to all humanity, and not just one person...we all deserve love, laughter and art...and we should fill our lives with them! :))

[Daydreamer]

My wholllleeee lovveee😍😍😍😍