Dream Dimension

I believe in the things only I can see.

I travelled through my senses
and yes, my dreams travelled
all within me
~
Thoughts as fires
Dreams as wars
Truths as pillars


Night cloaks and morning windows;
Swallowed walls and spilled cores

Sunsets swallowed by the seas
Strange music and offline notes

Dreams breaking into pearls
Ardent skin and woven beams

Cracks, tunnels, and fleeting wheels
Locked forevers and freedom streams

Visions as friends
Stars as walls
Daydreams,layers, and a million thoughts

Discovered poetry, and learned evermores

Dreaming as a religion
Fearlessness as a chisel

Delicate remedies and elegant dreams


The skies as eyes for what we do


The streets as home for what we dream

Reviews

[Rana]

It's surprising how it was just a couple of days ago I had been thinking about how I felt that we travel different dimensions through the different senses we possess. And how all of them superimpose one another to let us be able to fully experience this mortal reality. It's such a beautifully multi-dimensional world; while the world we visit in dreams (the literal ones) is such a contrast to it, where we have none of the senses feeding us with information, yet, dreams feel so real sometimes. Oh, I seem to have a lot to say, I hope I don't bore you. I really love this poem, ahhh. Guess what, I'm shaking my head, literally, because I just can't quote a favorite line, I can't, I'll just end up quoting your whole poem here. I absolutely admire your skillfulness, the way you create beauty through words and breathe meanings and wisdom into them. There's rhythm, lovely smooth flow and when I let your lines form images in my head, it's a great great experience. You're the queen of metaphors, haha. Then when I got to the end, I felt déjà vu and you'll see what I mean, Manal. I also have a suggestion (about some changes) to make, if you don't mind:
I have travelled through my senses
and yes, my dreams travel
all within me
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And do keep writing my friend! :)

[Daydreamer]

You're one of the best and most flattering people who ever talked about my poetry.. your reviews are holy to me and are enough to make me believe I am humbly "talented"
Your river of amazing sentiments is all I need on this site to suffice ❤❤❤❤❤
Thanks sooo much😍

[Perkele.7885]

you have an ability to see and write about possibilities of imagination that my mind just doesn't want to wrap itself around1

[Daydreamer]

And do you think that's good or not? I couldn't really make out..
But, thanks!

[sansrity sinha]

wonderful!! i loved it!!
awesome choice of words!! depicted the vision clearly!!

[Daydreamer]

You totally flattered me!😍😍😍
I thank youu for real😇

[Terry O'Leary]

Wonderful imagery... wonderful poem!!

[Daydreamer]

That's so kind❤ Thanks a lot!

[zunie frost]

this is really good
Dreams breaking into pearls
Ardent skin and woven beams

Cracks, tunnels, and fleeting wheels
Locked for ever and freedom streams
beautiful lines !!!!
keep it up

[Daydreamer]

Awww...
Thank you so much!😊
I appreciate 🙌

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!! happy new year

[Daydreamer]

HAPPY NEW YEAR🎉🎊🎉💟