Time to return yet?

It hasn't been until short ago

that I happened to realise __

I don't hate normal,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate pessimistic,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate empty,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate still,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate hostile,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate resentful,

I really hate oblivious

 

We were born into

a universe that contains us

and it never ceased to

anyday... It's rather like

we're the ones who

ceased to contain it within..

Too busy that we forgot

about that kind of bond..

 

Everytime anyone suffers

a shred of brokeness,

it's a call to RETURN..

where the pulse to life

runs in veins originally

craving to BURN!

Author's Note

I believe we were born happy. Born ready to embrace life. But in the process, we tend to give in to oblivion that stings away 'meaning' from the entire quest.

Reviews

[Zahra]

So true. We 'are' happiness, it's our reality. the worst thing about oblivion is when we are so centered in our 'miseries' that we forget duty towards others. Well penned

[Daydreamer]

And well said of you,as well💕
Thanks,Zahra 🌹

[KWP]

Hmmmm I have been pondering this thought - i actual fact I was just thinking about it whilst out with my Dog ... I have begun to look at it another way 'Everything is perfect just as it is.' I mean all we are is a sprout in nature, we come into this world and burst to life and yet sometimes it DOES seem we have forgotten how to live, but then the simple things like smelling a morning flower, kissing a baby's cheek, admiring a landscape, being with those you love, these things can remind us that we are living ... I think the human race puts too much pressure on itself to do, to achieve, to be something when really even though we may not be able to explain the truth, we can learn to be it, because in actual fact we are already there, we just get confused with the funny illusion we have created for ourselves ... evolution will continue to unfold - as we shall unfold with it ... hmmm does that make sense chick? tell me your thoughts ...BTW - thank you for taking me down this path .. your brain is certainly elevated ... LOVE ME xx

[Daydreamer]

@KWP-HIIIIII!!! WELCOMEE BAACKK🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Thank you for checking thiss out 😺😺😺
I just believe that I am way too tired of thinking such adverse thoughts about the universe
and sick of hearing people repeat them over and over and over... Till forver!
Too many possibilities just die awaayy.... Which is hell sadenning maan💔💔💔
There is infinite potential xxx
This what I want to bury in the depths of my mind foreverrr...
No evolution involved I guess... Just the occurence of the destinied events ;)

[KWP]

interesting thought process ... may I suggest you forget about thinking and listening to others and just be ..... your last sentence on your comment is interesting too ...

yes seven weeks later I am back - man that was an awesome trip xx

[Daydreamer]

DEFINITELYY! SCREW THEIR BELIEFSSS!
Haha, thankss 🌹🌹🌹🌹
WOW!

[Daydreamer]

Where ya been?
Inboxx me⭐

[Rana]

There surely is'nt anything worse than oblivion and the poem shows that in a way thats commendable. Loved the lines wherein you played with the word 'contain'. It's an encouraging piece of work, it not only urges us to realize and live life the way we were meant to live but to also use our brains to its full potentital satisfactorily till our time comes. Is an exquisite reminder.

[Daydreamer]

Exactly... Too many things weigh us down and fools us into illusions which all hinder us from using 'the full potential' within us, as you say 😉
Thank you for the gorgeous review🌹

[MomzillaNC]

You should include your author's note ("I believe we were born happy. Born ready to embrace life. But in the process, we tend to give in to oblivion that stings away 'meaning' from the entire quest.") in this poem. The poem is a pointed commentary on our willful blindness to the wealth this world and life offer us every moment of existence. Your author's note reads, to me, as the dénouement of your poem.

[Daydreamer]

I didn't assume the author's note would be apt to use inside the poem, so I used it as a note ✌

[Daydreamer]

And it definitely read out to me in the same sense once I wrote it 😍
thankss to youu🌻

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Cool Girl]

I love your theory. Wonderful work!!

[Daydreamer]

Thank you for reading 🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Cool Girl]

It was an honor:)

[Jennie Baron]

I truly like the rhythm set up by the repetition in that first stanza. And the poem is skillfully worded. Truly a call to live life to the fullest and find the meaning in it. Outstanding write!

[Daydreamer]

So grateful to youuu 🌹🌹🌹
I dream everyday of people
living life this way....🌌