Time to return yet?

It hasn't been until short ago

that I happened to realise __

I don't hate normal,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate pessimistic,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate empty,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate still,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate hostile,

I hate oblivious

I don't hate resentful,

I really hate oblivious

 

We were born into

a universe that contains us

and it never ceased to

anyday... It's rather like

we're the ones who

ceased to contain it within..

Too busy that we forgot

about that kind of bond..

 

Everytime anyone suffers

a shred of brokeness,

it's a call to RETURN..

where the pulse to life

runs in veins originally

craving to BURN!

Author's Note

I believe we were born happy. Born ready to embrace life. But in the process, we tend to give in to oblivion that stings away 'meaning' from the entire quest.

Reviews

[Moonie]

This makes the pulse of life burn in me too, and what a beautiful fire it is. It turns one inside out--the good side out where it can help others, and the bad side in where it can be worked upon by me. I love, love , love these lines
"It's rather like
we're the ones who
ceased to contain it within..
Too busy that we forgot
about that kind of bond.."

God bless you, dear sagacious! :)

[Larq]

I really get this piece. It is so important to get off the hamster wheel in life a look around....feel, love, and LIVE! Thought provoking...thank you. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Everytime anyone suffers
a shred of brokeness,
it's a call to RETURN..
where the pulse to life
runs in veins originally
craving to BURN!

In that brokeness...we can find HOPE! I love the ending.

[Confuser]

I really like it: We do tend to become oblivious to situations that should outrage us and I love the theme. News media reports a tiny bit of really what is happening; so many marketeers blinking lights buy me etc. - Very good writing; insightful and clever. Everytime anyone suffers a shred of brokeness,
it's a call to RETURN.. where the pulse to life runs in veins originally craving to BURN! Stands out; enjoyed it all. Thank you. Dale

[Blue]

Wise insights, Manal! Looking forward to reading more of your poems.

[stars are far]

That was very well written work, keep it coming :)

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much,sweetie 🌹🌹🌹

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thought provoking and quite well guided, well done, good read.

[Daydreamer]

Glad you enjoyed it :) Many thanks 😃

[Aayushi]

Simply wow, the thought behind this poem is so perfect and true which makes the poem a picture of reality.

[Daydreamer]

Wooww... Just thank youuu! ❤❤❤

[Aayushi]

Well thank you for sharing such a beautiful composition with us.

[Daydreamer]

Omg :')💕💕💕

[Bhumika Devkota]

I very much agree with you. Your theory is really interesting and the poem is very wonderful.

[Daydreamer]

:') :') :')...
Just THANKS :')🌹

[~]

:) I must agree with you. This poem, is a great reminder of the need for happiness. Well done!!!

[Daydreamer]

Oh, thank you for agreeing 😂
🌹🌹🌹🌹

[~]

You are welcome!

[Cerise]

Very well penned i had some thoughts like yours too...good write .:)

[Daydreamer]

I guess most of us think the same thoughts but at different times...
Thank you so much 💕💕