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A Poem by Daydreamer

And in the middle

of my exhaustion in

'Striving to be',

I learned I have a

dream of becoming

SIMPLER .....

© 2015 Daydreamer


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The more we understand, and the more we come to know, the simpler we become.....
:P Love the poem!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Do you think so? I so often in my persuit to sophistication, aspire to become simpler🎆
it l.. read more
How very apt! In this era when sophistication n suchlike giants keep on spreading their tentacles and messing up with young minds n spirits, it is simplicity that is the mutual dream. Perfect are ur words, love 'em.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

WONDERFUL is YOUR review 😍😍😍😍
Thanks dear🌹
Simple… profound… to the point. Well penned.

NOTES: The apostrophe isn't needed "Striving to be,"


Posted 9 Years Ago


MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Yes, the pause is indicated. The rule is that the punctuation must always be inside the quotations m.. read more
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

I can recall that rule, but as I said, my emphasis application made me confused.
Thank you for.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. BTW, there are rules about when to use single quotes versus double quotes too. But, .. read more
Wonderfully simple, Manal!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank youuu 🌹🌹🌹
Wow, it is profound....I have a dream of becoming SIMPLER......doesn't everybody. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Wow! Much appreciated your words and visit 🌹
Confuser

9 Years Ago

You are so welcome! Thank you. Dale
Wow. A profound write Manal which I like sooo much. Brevity at its best...:).............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Too happy to express my gratitude! Thankss 🌹
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................

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