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And in the middle

of my exhaustion in

'Striving to be',

I learned I have a

dream of becoming

SIMPLER .....

Reviews

[ReneeJ]

I feel like you should have your work displayed on posters, they are so short ad simple, yet they make you think. I can't help but agree with the things you often write.

[Monica M.]

In learning that you have a dream of being "simpler", this poem spoke volumes in its simplicity itself. Sometimes it feels like a lifelong journey "striving to be". It's like we are constantly trying to discover who we are and who we want to be. Then there's that thin line between the two. It took a while and a series of depressions later for me to discover that it's perfectly okay to be who I am. And who I am, is simple. Your poem was short, sweet, and to the point. I loved it!

[Rita L. Sev]

There's nothing like embracing simplicity... you will always live in plenty if you live simply. Very wise, Manal.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you know simpler isn't so bad....
and sometimes we strive a bit too hard...

less is more...i like that this is less...because it expresses an awful lot in short wording.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Manual,

Some of the profound sayings are said in the fewest words. Nice work!

Regards,

Al

[Matching Socks]

A great message my friend, it's the simple things that are most beautiful and peaceful. Society has put so many artificial pressures on us. Let's just be... So very wise. :)

[Daydreamer]

You know what Ana? I never actually realised that until verryy recently... That simple things have a great value just as the sophisticated ones :) I always look forward to becoming more fulfilled and integrated, and amidst all aspirations, I thought of other people... And the "simple" ones mesmerised me the most...
Thank you so muchh🌹🌹🌹

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :)
🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈

[Amber Lily]

When things are simple we want more, when things are too much we want less. It's difficult to find that perfect balance. A great thought many of us have!

[Daydreamer]

The right word 👌 "perfect balance"!
Thankyouuuu, Lilyquist😍

[~]

Cheers to you for this great ambition. I see you've taken upon you to defy the stereotype that women are complicated. :) :)

[Daydreamer]

Hahaha! Actually in meant it in a rather more personal sense..
Thank you,moonskittles 💘

[Bhumika Devkota]

Great short poem! Love it!

[Daydreamer]

Thankss to you 🌹

[Cindy Marietta]

The simpler things are, the better they are. I really like how short this poem was, it really added to the simplicity idea. Great poem:)

[Daydreamer]

And it took me a long time to understand that....
thank you,Amanda🌹