Beyond what's known

I believe in daydreaming. I believe in the power of sentiment.

In escape from

the never-ending ties

to this thought pattern,

beyond all what's

sickeningly familiar,

 

I spent a few moments...

on scribbling some

sheets tonight;

while been feeling

the need to abide

 

then, I sensed a rush..

imagined a silhoutte

and caught sight

 

of celestial moments

out.of.the.universe-like

in that path

where ardent sparks

emerged from ____

"lived daydreams"- a

place I've often been

so glad,so serene

 

And now,

I'm grateful....

Grateful to the day

it all lied

within sentiment zones

that reside

inside the corners

of my vivid mind

 

by then,I "realised"

it was ......."POSSIBLE"

Author's Note

what does "possible" represent to you over here?

Reviews

[Moonie]

And you say you're not sagacious enough?? My God, that right there is all the proof I need to support my side of the argument. :) :)
Those moments of hopefulness when we realise that the universe knows us, and that we hold a teeny tiny but important nonetheless, corner in it...when we see our daydreams becoming concrete, when we escape from the unending, sickeningly familiar thought patterns. Love it! :)

[Daydreamer]

You are the SWEETEST, indeed🌹

[Lauren]

I'm incredibly bad at writing reviews but your writing is beautiful and I can't get enough! Keep writing because you have true talent. Your writing is inspiring, truthful, thought provoking and clear and I love it. Keep up the great work

[Daydreamer]

Awww, Lauren 😍
actually you just saying so is more than enoughh..
thanks a lot for the encouragement 🎆🎆🎆

[Jamestown]

The mind is much more powerful then most will ever know, that being said trying to find
your full capacity of mind, should be a goal to everyone alive, otherwise becomes wasted energy,
daydreaming is the mind letting one know that possibility is endless if one believes and
moves to action, dream big, dream hard, play harder. Love this piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Daydreamer]

You know about it so well already🎆🎆🎆👌👌
Wish so many more people lived thinking in this manner..
we can do so many things!
You're worth all the blessings back
thanks,
Manal 😁

[Ruth]

WOW....breathtaking...like a fresh breeze...needed that :) xo

[Daydreamer]

How wonderful to hear that from you tonight💖💖💖

[The StoryTeller]

Possible means to me that we can be whoever we want to be, do whatever we want, because we are full of young blood and are free! WE CAN CHANGE THE WORLD! This represents (to me) finding sight of that simple fact amidst such dark thoughts in a dark mind, in a twisted reality, in a screwy world we live in, full of depression and anger, trapped in the Maze and the Rift. Great write! I'm sorry if you don't understand all of what I've wrote. I'm in this amazingly amazing happy hype right now from Gold by Imagine Dragons... :P

[Daydreamer]

HAHAHAHA OKAAY! Is this a new release? I like Imagine Dragons 😁
thank you, resilient one 🎆

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah no problem! And they are an amazing band... Gold is from their new album, Smoke and Mirrors.

[~]

daydreaming is always a means of escaping the reality, if it is not happy.. meanwhile, I always try to make a change to that reality, so it matches my daydreaming.

[Daydreamer]

We all ought to try to cause these changes! Thankyouuuu,Moonskittles💕💕💕

[Confuser]

Miracles! Manal Ahmed, as an answer to your questions. You are an unbelievable talented writer. I loved it and thank you so much. Wonderful writer; I laughed, I paused to think only a second for I was in such a hurry to read another word. Bravo. Dale

[Daydreamer]

Dale, you're a wonderful human 💞💞💞💞 I can't thank you enough for this dazzling review... I never expected anybody would enjoy it heartedly... 🌹🌹🌹

[Confuser]

Oh, it is wonderful! I know how you feel; but can't write like this. It is Still Very Hard for me to believe somebody REALLY like my work. Believe me you are TALENTED!

[MomzillaNC]

Interesting imagery. Lovely write about realizing a sense of belonging and/or purpose in this infinite universe.

Maybe the lines "out.of.the.universe-like" and "Grateful to the day" could be shifted to the right margin as well.
"it all lied" Perhaps you meant, "it all [laid]"

[Daydreamer]

Thoughtful suggestions! Thank youuuu😁😁💕

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. I hope it was helpful.

[Tricia Pattinson]

Lovely experience expressed in this write. Thank you for sharing.

[Daydreamer]

Hello there :) how are you?
Thanks a lot🌹

[Sami Khalil]

Hope, possibility, realization along with dreaming. You cover alll these positives in.your wonderful thoughts and pen...Excellent...:).....

[Daydreamer]

👆 Real flatteration👌
Many thanksss 😊

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....