Rhyme of Time

Please read the author's note. Thanks.

It's all stale now and,
This emptiness just feels so familiar..

 

Take me to the place back then ..

 

Before we've got  too wrapped into this tornado of "what's going on and how it'd rather be"

 

Guess we're sunk in broken syllables of yesterday....

 

Take me back in time when-

 

Everything was a reason to be amused
Our skin nearly hypnotized at the thought of being alive

 

We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream

Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time

 

I'm not here tryin' to romantacise history but,
 we've got to wake up
And see that our past,present and future are all sonants to the same rhyme;

Endless spirals of everything we've lived,felt, loved and lost

 

Now, our cerebrums are just so fused..
from our bewitched remembrance

Where we'd only dwell on every turn,
every lesson we've learned

and kill everything else we never recalled

 

So let's hold on to the cadence to which our senses respond

'Cause in every waking moment, a meaning is born

 

Author's Note

Too often, people embrace the past in weird ways. They kinda filter the past; thinking of either memories or lessons learned ONLY, and make judgements on the quality of their life based on that. They make the past 'empty' through their method of remembrance. They totally forget all of the supreme moments (good or bad) that could give an absolute meaning to their quest of life.The past,present and future are all connected and one cannot exist without the other. One should live in loving memory of all three in order to lead a life with passion.
P.S- This is just my personal opinion 100% :), all discussions allowed :)

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful thoughts.........

"We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream

Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time"

"So let's hold on to the cadence to which our senses respond

'Cause in every waking moment, a meaning is born"

amazing poem!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Daydreamer]

Pushkaaaar, many thanks to youu🌹

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WooooW!!! you are welcome!!! :) :)

[KWP]

'Cause in every waking moment, a meaning is born! Brilliant! This is how I live my life :)

I enjoyed very much each word, each line ... I knew where you were headed immediately, but that is probably due to the fact that I understand how your mind works :)

To walk and notice the connection that each ad every breath with the universe is understanding what it means to live ...

As usual, your words allow me to go deeper than surface level, swim around and find some teaching from long ago ...

Excellent .. x x

[Daydreamer]

Hahahahaha, I knew you especially would ;)! So cool :D
thank you, sunshine😍 so glad you enjoyed xx💕

[Daydreamer]

gooood memorriiiessss to think of :)

[Daydreamer]

💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

[Matching Socks]

What a wonderful write my friend, very profound.
I tend to analyze my past way too much which is not necessarily a good thing.

[Daydreamer]

Hellooo sweetest Ançe 💕💕💕
thank you so much,honey 😉
just free your mind, it's not worth it 💜😎

[Tricia Pattinson]

Interesting and profound write. I paused to reflect at the end of each stanza/line.

[Daydreamer]

Thanks for your feedback :)
much appreciated!💖

[Ruth]

All play an integral part in shaping our lives, this is wonderfully executed and so beautifully written! :)

[Daydreamer]

Such a privilege to receive these words from you hun xx
will soon be off to read your works 💖 I wasn't active since long back ..

[Jennie Baron]

This is wise, perfectly worded and absolutely brilliant. I'm saving this in my favorites for sure. I apologize for having not visited your work in a while. Outstanding!

[Daydreamer]

Many thanks for always being so supportive and kind! You always flatter me with your lovely reviews 💝💝💝 I'm the one who should apologize, I have been off for quite long!

[Daydreamer]

How have you been :)?

[Jennie Baron]

Very well, thanks. I haven't even posted many new poems; I'm working on perfecting my book. Hope you've been well.

[Sami Khalil]

I like your observations and lessons you share with us on the time continuum concepts. We are truly a produc of all of that. Bravo, ma'm...:)................

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much! Always a delight to receive your feedback :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[Amber Lily]

I completely agree with this! You should never try to forget your past or just look at the parts you want to. Each and every experience we go through is a lesson we learn for the future. If you try to forget, you might waste time making the same mistakes.
Very insightful :)

[Daydreamer]

Morover, it's not like the past should always behind your back in order to lead a good life.
Thank you so much, dear for the time and comment ❤

[Daydreamer]

Always stay*