Rhyme of Time

Rhyme of Time

A Poem by Daydreamer
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It's all stale now and,
This emptiness just feels so familiar..

 

Take me to the place back then ..

 

Before we've got  too wrapped into this tornado of "what's going on and how it'd rather be"

 

Guess we're sunk in broken syllables of yesterday....

 

Take me back in time when-

 

Everything was a reason to be amused
Our skin nearly hypnotized at the thought of being alive

 

We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream

Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time

 

I'm not here tryin' to romantacise history but,
 we've got to wake up
And see that our past,present and future are all sonants to the same rhyme;

Endless spirals of everything we've lived,felt, loved and lost

 

Now, our cerebrums are just so fused..
from our bewitched remembrance

Where we'd only dwell on every turn,
every lesson we've learned

and kill everything else we never recalled

 

So let's hold on to the cadence to which our senses respond

'Cause in every waking moment, a meaning is born

 

© 2014 Daydreamer


Author's Note

Daydreamer
Too often, people embrace the past in weird ways. They kinda filter the past; thinking of either memories or lessons learned ONLY, and make judgements on the quality of their life based on that. They make the past 'empty' through their method of remembrance. They totally forget all of the supreme moments (good or bad) that could give an absolute meaning to their quest of life.The past,present and future are all connected and one cannot exist without the other. One should live in loving memory of all three in order to lead a life with passion.
P.S- This is just my personal opinion 100% :), all discussions allowed :)

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beautiful thoughts.........

"We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream

Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time"

"So let's hold on to the cadence to which our senses respond

'Cause in every waking moment, a meaning is born"

amazing poem!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Pushkaaaar, many thanks to youu🌹
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

WooooW!!! you are welcome!!! :) :)



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Gosh,, this is an Incredible Piece..Leaves me Speechless how well this is written. Thank You for sharing maria
I pick this poem for the group forum.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Wooaaaaah😵😵😵
This is flatteration at its bestest!!!
So many "thank you"s to you.. read more
maria  ( rose)

9 Years Ago

hhaa (smiles) aw, you're so welcome !!!
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thaanks,Love!♥
We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream
Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time

Such truth and wisdom in these words. Memories can be good or bad, but like you have so eloquently expressed, they are all important. The past can define our future, leading us to better days or in the least, days of understanding.
Your wisdom is well beyond your years my friend.
:) Julie



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

I'm completely flattered by your review.
and that's definitely what I feel,as well!
Perc.. read more
We were never too lost, too broken or too young
to dream
Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time

Marvellous. I agree with this approach. And then everything happens for a reason, we waste our life energy by considering many precious experiences as "losses". Beautiful piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kindness💘💘💘
much appreciated
Zahra

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I completely agree with you on this... One should not live in the past. Believe me, we all try to leave behind memories that do us no good.. But heck no, they haunt us until the end of time.. Wounds will heal over time but the scars will last..

A really good write :)



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Actually I believe we SHOULD remember the past but in a certain way only for own good... Some people.. read more
Fantastic piece.... I completely share your philosophy on this subject. The perception of the past is very powerful, for some it is positive, and creates the inspiration for moving forward, and growing. For others it is quite the opposite. You really captured this. I will read this many times......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

Thank you for making my day, Jeffrey😁😁😁
i don't know if the past is just lessons learned..good and bad experiences in my life are all part of it, part of making me into who i am today...a little older, a little wiser, and really comfortable with all of the past...we always as if we would do things differently if we could...
i don't ....i just often reflect, and ponder...and accept.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

I believe, people always see the past better than it was... And always long to the older days, with .. read more
Gawd, I always fall in love with the way you link your words. Sonants of the same rhyme??--damn it! Why didn't I think of that!! :))

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

You're welcome! :))
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

💕💕💕💕💕💕
Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
We are all prone to look at the past through "Rose-colored glasses." I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing. It can be humanity's greatest coping mechanism. The world can be a very dark and terrifying place; the need to see and to remember the good can be the saving of someone's sanity. Some things are just too much to deal with all at once. Every person's journey is unique and we all have a unique perspective to share. I don't think anyone gets to say someone else's remembrances are wrong. No one can walk another person's journey; no one has the right to decide what should be in another person's brain. But, the human mind rarely ever really forgets. Those memories reemerge as a person must come to face their issues. The honesty, or lack thereof, with which people deal with their issues is where the real problems begin.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Nobody condemned memory, but there is a right way to remember! I haven't spent time writing this to .. read more
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. I agree that memory should help people move forward and live better lives. I just un.. read more
something I believe that only authors truly get...well done. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

PATRIICIIAA! I MISS YOU! LONG TIME😢💔 how have you beeen?
thanks,darling for the time to .. read more
Indeed, the past often lends itself to nostalgia and filters those moments we rather keep hidden, where to embrace may lead to learning, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

9 Years Ago

thanks for your contribution by sharing your opinion :)
sorry for late reply

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