I surrender..

I shall always be an art lover.

Daydreams slip

through gazing minds,

in weary moments of the day ..

 

glimpses of kindness

and serene smiles

adjust the bigger picture again ..

 

 

 

 

"I surrender to

all the beauty

that which I see

amidst images

of distorted lives."

 

-Manal Ahmed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

If you pause along and catch glances of people,places,recall memories,observe kindness; you shall always find beauty and hope.What a
universe it is!xx

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

I am stunned by how beautiful and well thought out this poem is! The message it delivers is one of the most positive and uplifting I have ever seen in a poem, and the picture you included really adds extra spice to it! I don't know any other way to say it, this is truly amazing! :) :)

[Daydreamer]

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MADE MY HORRIBLE DAY BETTER! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU:')

[DoormanDan]

Anytime! And it's nice to know that I was able to help in someway! :)

[Daydreamer]

Much appreciated 😁

[Sleiman Azizi]

I like the space some of the lines exist within.

But then, I'm partial to suggestion more so than conclusion.

Nice work.

[Daydreamer]

Thanks! I'm sorry I don't understand your suggestion?!

[Sleiman Azizi]

I think that space is more important than words. Many poets tell you directly what they feel. That's okay but I believe that suggestion is usually more powerful.

[Daydreamer]

Suggestion about how to feel/do?!

[Sleiman Azizi]

Sorry, what I mean is that suggesting something group poetry is often more powerful than telling it up front.

[Daydreamer]

I guess, as well

[Sami Khalil]

"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

-Manal Ahmed

[Pryde Foltz]

"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

Zen ….. Love it.

[Daydreamer]

Thankyou,Pryde💖

[Anahat]

Nicely penned :) Well done

[Daydreamer]

Thank you😎

[AYVID N]

Here is a true poet's mind at work....

"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

There's much beauty to behold in the ugliness that surrounds us. I heartily agree and appreciate your beautiful thought. I'd love to be your friend.

[Daydreamer]

AWW...that's so kind!
My pleasure,for suree ♥♥♥

[Daydreamer]

THANKS TO YOU!

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome. Keep writing and sharing and keep in touch :)

[Blue]

Yes, yes. Wonderful and inspiring message here. Glad I dropped by on your page. Keep writing!

[Daydreamer]

Thanks a lot for the encouragement!♥

[MsJewel]

A poet can find beauty in the simple things..and you my friend are a stellar poet.
Your poem is lovely.

:) Julie

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much,gorgeous woman

[S.F]

Your words in this poem have the power to renew corrupted faith and hope, even in the most pessimistic people (me). I don't find that in a lot of poems. I must admit you did a great job. Your words are very brief yet they carve deep meaning into us. Beautiful. Well done!
-S.F

[Daydreamer]

Do you know how much this means? I'm a "details" person, I feel, and contemplate every single thing around me... And I'll ponder upon your kind words for sure! A beautiful "THANK YOU" to you!🌹

[Aayushi]

You moulded your views nicely in your poem...simple and beautiful.

[Daydreamer]

Thanks!