I surrender..

I shall always be an art lover.

Daydreams slip

through gazing minds,

in weary moments of the day ..

 

glimpses of kindness

and serene smiles

adjust the bigger picture again ..

 

 

 

 

"I surrender to

all the beauty

that which I see

amidst images

of distorted lives."

 

-Manal Ahmed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

If you pause along and catch glances of people,places,recall memories,observe kindness; you shall always find beauty and hope.What a
universe it is!xx

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

I am stunned by how beautiful and well thought out this poem is! The message it delivers is one of the most positive and uplifting I have ever seen in a poem, and the picture you included really adds extra spice to it! I don't know any other way to say it, this is truly amazing! :) :)

[Daydreamer]

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MADE MY HORRIBLE DAY BETTER! THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU:')

[DoormanDan]

Anytime! And it's nice to know that I was able to help in someway! :)

[Daydreamer]

Much appreciated 😁

[ei Funding]

loved the optimism. simply beautiful

[The StoryTeller]

I agree with your about me. :) Beauty and inspiration is everywhere, and as you so well said in your poem, you can't fight it, so just give yourself over. It wasn't like mind blowing or anything to me, but I liked it nonetheless.

[Daydreamer]

I don't even try to fight it... HAHAHA okay.....
thank you anyway

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, I probably shouldn't try to fight it anyway. And sorry, I didn't mean that as a jab.

[Daydreamer]

No no no... All is well, I understood your honest view! But I didn't mean for it to mindblow anyone actually :P

[The StoryTeller]

Oh, okay, that makes sense. xD Anyways, I will take your message and use it, and just listen to what the world and God and the people have to tell me, and hear it truly, and derive my inspiration from that.

[The StoryTeller]

I am going to put it in my general reading list, just to remind me of that.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Once again, I agree with you, The poem is very touching and wonderful.

[Daydreamer]

Thank you :')
🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Cool Girl]

This poem was very touching. The words are so meaningful and flow so beautifully. Wonderful job my friend:)

[Daydreamer]

Thankssss,Coolio😎💕

[Cool Girl]

Haha, you're welcome!! :)

[Norah]

This a wonderful,profound piece of poetry...bravo!

[Daydreamer]

Hey Noora where have you been? Thank you a lot,dear 💖

[Rana]

This was a little piece of delight. Reading the title, i expected some tale depicting helplessness; but look what u've got here instead.. It's inspiring, we all need to know there's always beauty and happiness around waiting to catch our eyes.. I surrender too :)

[Daydreamer]

Thanks a lot..♥

[MomzillaNC]

Beautifully written and visually well layer out.

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much,dear 💜

[MomzillaNC]

yvw :D

[Zahra]

"I surrender to
all the beauty
that which I see
amidst images
of distorted lives."

When we see beauty, we see a reflection of our higher self... they're right in saying that beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
Wonderful write my friend.

[Daydreamer]

Zahra,THANKS TO YOU!💐💐💐💐

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

glimpses of kindness

and serene smiles

adjust the bigger picture again ..




Simply beautiful thank you
for sharing and thank you for
your kind review and comments
on my page.



Blessings. Benita

[Daydreamer]

Thankyouuu💘

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. :)