Believe

We'll trust in these views

the next time we hear the muse

inspire us with its calls (n)

 

to dancing in celebration  

of our fulfilled dreams

 

while having been

reflected by the facets

of our realities

 

Because tonight

we're feeling real free;

 

with made up minds

to deposit our hearts;

 

fearlessly sleeping

between the arms of hope

Reviews

[KWP]

hello chick ... so I was struck with your words of wisdom ... 'while having been reflected, by the facets of our realities' oooh this speaks so many volumes ... your awareness is high, you are a lucky soul ...

I just read this and posted on my FB page ... look at the synchronicity ...

'How can we be free to look and learn when our minds from the moment we are born to the moment we die are shaped by a particular culture in the narrow pattern of "me?"
For centuries we have be conditioned by nationality, caste, tradition, religion, language, education, literature, art, custom, convention, propaganda of all kinds, economic pressure, the food we eat, the climate we live in, our family, our friends, our experience - every influence we can think of - and therefore our responses to every problem are conditioned.
Are you aware that your are conditoned?'

Krishnamurti

Your words remind us of what life is all about x x nice one ...

[Daydreamer]

What a beautiful gift it is to receive your review this evening!♥
Thank you so much, you're so refreshing,Elizabeth😁
Glad I've collided into you here on the cafe x x

[KWP]

Yes yes soul chick .... I agree a beautiful collision xx

[Daydreamer]

btw, this extract is so much similar to what I was trying to convey in "Happiness is(?)"!!
Thanks,love 💕

[KWP]

ahhh yes ... happiness flows through once you hit the very core of this meaning ... x x where do you live ?

[Daydreamer]

Hahah! In KSA :)

[KWP]

KSA ? huh ???

[Daydreamer]

Yes xx
Kingdom of Saudi Arabia ;)

[KWP]

oh really ... cool I have not any friends from there ... welcome x x x x

[Daydreamer]

I am an Egyptian living there xx
thanks :*

[KWP]

I was in Egypt long ago ... :) climbed Mt Sinai, hung out in Cairo ...

[Daydreamer]

Please come again next summer xx I live in Cairo

[Persona]

This makes a good spoken poem.

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much :)

[Patricia]

well written great lines, bravo :)

[Daydreamer]

Hey there,Patricia 😁
thank you so much
for the encouragment :)

[Tricia Pattinson]

This stanza stood out for me - while having been reflected

by the facets of our realities
Nice flow and enjoyed reading it!

[Daydreamer]

Was my favorite part too :)
thank you so much,Ma'am for the visit

[ReneeJ]

This gave me such a calming feeling. Well written!

[Daydreamer]

Wow! Great to hear so :)
Thank you so much,dear 😁

[Sami Khalil]

The title, the poem and the wording were wonderful. Thank you for sharing...:)....................

[Daydreamer]

Extremely honoured to hear so :)
thank you so much,Sir
Stay blessed :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....:)........

[Matching Socks]

Hi Miss,
Another great one from you!
The whole poem supports the title "Believe".
You have captured that very well.
It's a short poem, but it says so much.
I love the short ones for this reason. The say a lot in just a little.

[Daydreamer]

Aww,naughty,adorable Ançe,how have you been?
Thank you so much, babe♥
So glad that's what you think!

[Matching Socks]

I am well, thank you Miss. :)

[Daydreamer]

Anytime,pretty x x

[Edward Lancheister]

hope is the essence of the revival in mind and life. strength without limitation

good message you have there. i like it

[Daydreamer]

Thanks,Sir
So true

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is marvelous. Keep up the great work!╰☆╮

[Daydreamer]

What an honour,gorgeous poet!♥
Thanks!