Believe

We'll trust in these views

the next time we hear the muse

inspire us with its calls (n)

 

to dancing in celebration  

of our fulfilled dreams

 

while having been

reflected by the facets

of our realities

 

Because tonight

we're feeling real free;

 

with made up minds

to deposit our hearts;

 

fearlessly sleeping

between the arms of hope

Reviews

[KWP]

hello chick ... so I was struck with your words of wisdom ... 'while having been reflected, by the facets of our realities' oooh this speaks so many volumes ... your awareness is high, you are a lucky soul ...

I just read this and posted on my FB page ... look at the synchronicity ...

'How can we be free to look and learn when our minds from the moment we are born to the moment we die are shaped by a particular culture in the narrow pattern of "me?"
For centuries we have be conditioned by nationality, caste, tradition, religion, language, education, literature, art, custom, convention, propaganda of all kinds, economic pressure, the food we eat, the climate we live in, our family, our friends, our experience - every influence we can think of - and therefore our responses to every problem are conditioned.
Are you aware that your are conditoned?'

Krishnamurti

Your words remind us of what life is all about x x nice one ...

[Daydreamer]

What a beautiful gift it is to receive your review this evening!♥
Thank you so much, you're so refreshing,Elizabeth😁
Glad I've collided into you here on the cafe x x

[KWP]

Yes yes soul chick .... I agree a beautiful collision xx

[Daydreamer]

btw, this extract is so much similar to what I was trying to convey in "Happiness is(?)"!!
Thanks,love 💕

[KWP]

ahhh yes ... happiness flows through once you hit the very core of this meaning ... x x where do you live ?

[Daydreamer]

Hahah! In KSA :)

[KWP]

KSA ? huh ???

[Daydreamer]

Yes xx
Kingdom of Saudi Arabia ;)

[KWP]

oh really ... cool I have not any friends from there ... welcome x x x x

[Daydreamer]

I am an Egyptian living there xx
thanks :*

[KWP]

I was in Egypt long ago ... :) climbed Mt Sinai, hung out in Cairo ...

[Daydreamer]

Please come again next summer xx I live in Cairo

[Rita L. Sev]

A strong testament to the hope that keeps us going. Very nicely done!

[Daydreamer]

Thank you,Rita :)

[maria ( rose)]

oh my ! Love this poem♥it sends a beautiful message..that last stanza is just so touching and true
To deposit our hearts
fearlessly sleeping
between the arms of hope.

[Daydreamer]

Aw, thanks for being boisterous,Maria!!
Hopefully, the arms won't shackle them and they finally die :(
♥♥♥

[Susan Beth Horvath]

This is a beautiful read full of phrasing that tickles the mind and imagination..

[Daydreamer]

Many thanks, dear Susan ♥♥♥

[Debbie_Philly]

What a wonderful message.... I agree wholeheartedly.... well written and just a pleasure to read !! :)

[Daydreamer]

What a wonderful review... I occassionally feel so optimistic.... As when I find the validation for hope, you can say... LOL! But I guess, I am starting to learn that once fearlessness takes over, hope and warmth shall follow in xx

[Debbie_Philly]

Yes... :) Theres always hope. that hard to keep in mind... I find it hard myself as well... but keep holding on to it... Good night hun !! :)

[Daydreamer]

Hahaha, so I am not alone xx
Aw, I see the mornin' sun beamin' in here ... Timezones that must be!!
Sweet dreams, dear 😄

[Mary Ochoa]

"Because tonight
we're feeling real free;
with made up minds"

Such a great write my friend! Made me feel relaxed and reminded me to be free. Beautiful write! :)

[Daydreamer]

Aww!! Thank you so much ♥

[Mary Ochoa]

You're very welcome!:D

[Ruth]

There is such focus within this, lovely poem...the last stanza is beautiful x

[Daydreamer]

Thank you babe xx

[Amber Lily]

Hope is a wonderfully tough thing to bare, but sometimes you do just need to take hold of it and see where it'll take you. Well done :)

[Daydreamer]

That's an occassional thing according to me,
and this poem is basically a sentiment of "finding hope"
in opposition to "When Would Life Happen" where "hope is lost"
trying to be a versatile poet :)
thank you so much

[Jennie Baron]

I can't imagine anything that could make this more amazingly beautiful and profound. You are truly growing as a poet. Of course I always try to be optimistic and love anything hopeful and uplifting.

[Daydreamer]

I can't thank you enough for this beautiful review!♥
I am rather occassionally optimistic, to be honest!
but looking back at my work, I've decided I should capture
some positive sentiment because I've captured the dark ones as well!

[MsJewel]

A beautiful poem of inspiration. Thank you for the uplifting thoughts today. This is lovely.

:) Julie

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much :)
you're welcome😇