Harmonious Months

The demands of life are really tiring, but never stop dreaming anyway <3

Can't wait for the months to get harmonious

and watch the wavelengths of this flow

set up to my standard of desire

 

Life won't stop to notice anyone, I know

and I'm just another anyone...

 

neither will the world forge itself to satisfy me

 

But,

there are plenty of dreams I've bottled,

hoping to see them floating in the future

 

I see vivid shades of my youth in the

dreams I keep on painting

 

the simplest joys of my existence;

in the plans I have made-up

 

and kept - packed;

to be embraced by my future days

 

these stashed wishes

got my brain wired up

as they keep buzzing endlessly

 

I'm just sick of switching sentiments

and my mind has got a lot to do

other than daydream...

 

but because you gotta stay patient

for what you want most,

I'm gonna stick my pieces together

till the months get harmonious

.. 

 

Author's Note

The months are "harmonious" to what my mood wished for them to be.

Reviews

[KWP]

but because you gotta stay patient
for what you want most,
I'm gonna stick my pieces together
till the months get harmonious
..

save the best for last ... what a fantastic stanza ... what a great motto ... what a great reminder about life itself ... I really love your thought patterns ..... they are quietly waiting to be stitched into your quilt of life xx

[Daydreamer]

Elizabethhhhhhhh, thank you for the besy review evveerrr😍😍😍😍

[Daydreamer]

Besttt***😆😆😆

[Anahat]

very nicely expressed...I liked it :)
Keep up the good work!

Love Anahat :)

[Moonie]

This is my second or third read, and I still LOVE IT!:))

[Daydreamer]

Sooo, we're covenantly exchanging beauty today?😇💘😁

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I loved this stanza's line here my favorite.



But-there are plenty of dreams I've bottled

hoping to see them floating in the future

I see vivid shades of my youth in the

dreams I keep on painting.



The months always seem to have beauty
and harmony to them no matter the time
of the year :)



Very Elegant and lovely penned here
thank you for your kind review and
comments you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much for your kindness,Benita :')
Actually, the months that are harmonious to your moods are the best ;)
Blessings xx

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. was a pleasure to read. well I love all months April and may it rains but brings flowers and I love rain June Bugs the are lovely July and June it's hot but it has been calmer cooler weather during the endings of July and now a bit in August it has gone down to the 60's and 80's it can be like 113 103 in the summer some times and 92 93 degrees it gets pretty hot but the best is 60 to 80's but I love all the months but that's me so they always sing to me :) I love spring and Autumn when it is calm cozy weather not too hot not too cold is the best for me. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Tricia Pattinson]

"got my brain wired up" - fantastic imagery and so true! I loved how you expressed your journey and expectations for the right time to experience them. Enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing!

[Daydreamer]

wow... so glad to hear so!
you're most welcome, always
much appreciated xx

[Matching Socks]

I think there's a nice message in here Miss.
Those months will come around. :)

[Daydreamer]

I'd love to know what you think ♥😂
Thank you so much, I hope so xx

[Matching Socks]

The last verse sums it up Miss.
It's says to me that we can endure and then rebuild.
Patience will be rewarded.

[Daydreamer]

Hats off xx
Surely♥

[Mirra]

Sometimes I feel the same, like you feel you're inside a black and white movie - everything dull and you're waiting for the first haze of rainbow to strike. Well-penned!

[Daydreamer]

Tell me about it!! 😖😖😖
Thank you for your time and review :*

[Chris Micha]

Wow!! Such beauty and grace in this piece. Filled with longing of a better day. Bravo!!

[Daydreamer]

So so much!! Thank you,Chris😁

[Lydia Shutter]

No, the world is not a paradise, but there are plenty of things we have that are wonderful. "I can't resist the beauty nor the electricity of the ideas of it" Looking ahead with hope and anticipation is a good thing. Packing up your joys to experience them another day is a delightful concept. I enjoyed your poem very much. Lydi**

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so much,Ma'am Lydia💚💚💚

[Susan Beth Horvath]

very well written, enjoyed very much

[Daydreamer]

Wow! Thank you so much😍