Emotional Algebra

If you think 

you only got five senses

and can only live once,

let me tell you,

you suck at

emotional algebra

Author's Note

One can transcend the normal.

Reviews

[Rim]

This is brilliant Manal ! I do suck at Emotional algebra I guess, probably because I pretend to be a realistic, deny the existence of pure emotion.
Algebra is the most fascinating thing in Maths, as it defines our lives by logic, our social lives can be calculated by it, but I'm no expert in emotional substances, so I can't say that it could calculate emotion ..

[Daydreamer]

Haha,Rim! I'm mind blown now xx
Never mind, now you know the new rules ;)
follow them xx
much love xx

[Rim]

Haha, yes Sir !

[Daydreamer]

😎✌😎✌😎✌✌

[Ayushi]

Very intelligent write..
Crisp and clear and I loved your straightforwardness :)

[Daydreamer]

Being perceived as any bit of intelligent is my ultimate goal!
THANKS :D

[Ayushi]

lol
yeah mine too but you win :p

[Daydreamer]

Let's make it "we" actually then :P

[Ayushi]

alright...:D

[A. Amos]

Ha ha ha now this was really cool, you're a sharp writer my friend:)

[Daydreamer]

How I appreciate ! Xx

[Ruth]

Ohh, love this! Yes, clever and so very true...excellent! x

[Daydreamer]

Awww! Appreciate your hearty comment xx

[just Penny]

LOL...Interesting brevity here, but with a sharp philosophical message wrapped in it. I always find it odd that we never add "common sense" to "the five senses"...hmmm...
Like what you did in this poem. Penny

[Daydreamer]

Hey there, Penny! Well, actually my message through this poem was a bit vague. I meant that according to my views, life is a world of fantasy but only to people ready to see that; choose the extraordinary ( explore the versatile world, which needs invigoration of senses) over the ordinary (just a life with our five common senses). So they need extra senses to build that view of the world to themselves :)

[Jennie Baron]

A wonderful five lines, I must say!

[Daydreamer]

Massive thanks! I must say:)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, I love this MissManalAhmad. There is so much that could be said from these five short lines. I love the title and the flow. It flows smoothly. I like the second line "and can only live once" because that is true that you don't live only once. I interpreted that there is not one life. You have the after life either spent in Heaven or Hell. That is where souls will spend eternity. Maybe you did not intend for that line to mean that but that is what I got from it. Also, that you live every single day. The phrase "YOLO" sure doesn't make since when, in fact, you do live every day until it's your time to go. There is more than five senses that we have. We have the five that we know of and can count on our hands. But there is more when we are talented with certain gifts and can feel different things that others can't. Everything about this is powerful in its own way.

[Daydreamer]

I'm completely flattered! I honestly admit this poem is not really sufficing its contents, but me using the word "algebra" was because it is a branch full of unknowns, which can actually be found but remain unknown if you don't try to solve them. And i believe strongly emotions work the same way too. I believe we have way more tha five senses and we definitely live more than a life. My profile was shining ;)