- From a Dreamer's Mindset

- From a Dreamer's Mindset

A Poem by Daydreamer
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Hopes can be toxic to dreamers sometimes. It feels vulnerable; deciding to risk to invest all they ever wanted (which occurrence is only a possibility) in their future package.

"

Who said nights were for sleep?

- that's the time your thoughts

 are running through your head

and shaping your favorite

wonted labyrinth as they

bind end to end..

Once again, your losing eyes wander

as you imagine the transcendently 

vast and lustrous graveyard of stars..

which you observe solely till

you sleep your sadness away..

Swap to the mysteries of your future; 

your instantaneous runway..

Picture all the moments

you desperately dream of,

and frame them with

your decorated hopes..

Every ungranted wish is stashed

and inevitably will fall

back into your way..

All the answers to

what is and what was

will come rushing in

when you least expect it

 

And all the reasons why it's worth-while..

© 2014 Daydreamer


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This is an amazing inspirational piece. You did a great job portraying how when we feel so anxious for something to happen, it never seems to happen. Life will always throw curve balls and blessings at you at the most unexpected times, and we eventually find out how everything happens for a reason.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Awww Michelle! And that's what I was trying to depict here but, on the grounds of hope💖
Tha.. read more



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beautifully said but me myself I try in not stay
up late as it causes many health problems in the
future heart dieses Heart attacks Diabetes and more
there's many Chemicals in our thoughts that must get released
from sleep so it helps us it is very healthy and helpful I think and
wonder if it causes Dementia My Mother is a RN Nurse BTW. :)



But this was like walking through a Labyrinth Maze
I love that movie very nicely penned.



Thank you for your lovely review and comment
you left on my page and for sharing this wonderful poem.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Hahahah LOL! Good information about health! Actually I always swap to the "Future" package xD even i.. read more
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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

The world would be a lonely place without dreamers I am bit of a daydreamer
in my own world .. read more
As someone who stays up until 5 or 6am most nights, I truly feel this poem. Very elegant. ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much,Brittany ✋❤
Which you observe solely till you sleep your sadness away.. Swap to the mysteries of your future; your instantaneous runway..

I'm in love with this. Very exquisite poem!

-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Oh my God!! Thank you so so much😍😍😍
"your losing eyes wander as you imagine the transcendentally vast and lustrous graveyard of stars..
Which you observe solely till you sleep your sadness away.. Swap to the mysteries of your future; your instantaneous runway.."

This was wonderful Manal. Powerful too...Bravo................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

So many secrets in this poem. I deposited so much of me inside of it and it means a lot to me....read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome muchly...:)......................
Lovely piece of art, as we lay down on our pillows, that is when we build our dreams. I love this artwork

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Such empathy ❤
Thanks,Audrey
I can definitely relate to this poem. I can imagine a graveyard of unfulfilled dreams. Nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Actually, it was a reference to the sky. Thank you for reading and reviewing,Steph :)
Gosh, I can't pick a favourite line. Such a pleasure to read. Gives the reader strength, hope.
Thank you for this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

WOW!THANK YOU GORGEOUS ANÇE😍😍😍
You've made my night😂😂😂
#timezone 😝
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

:) it was my pleasure, sincerely.
The first line is a great start to a great piece.

Picture all the moments you desperately dream of,
and frame them with your decorated hopes..

Love this line so much! Really nice piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Natalie for visiting and leaving a lovely review 😂😝😜😂😁
haha, .. read more
Natalie Dieudonne

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Oh yeah!!!! Awesome!!! I love this as well and can relate all too well to this poem.
" Picture all the moments you desperately dream of,
and frame them with your decorated hopes.."
I just had to stop and visit that line a few times....it demands it. perfect!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

10 Years Ago

Real thanks Patricia! This poem means so much to me.....
Lovely review 😍😄

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