why

A Poem by Courtney

complete and uder bordom

why I’D GIVE IT ALL AWAY………why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why whyJUST TO HAVE SOMEONE TO GO TO why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why

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why why whu why QUESTIONS WHY…………………………..................

© 2008 Courtney

Author's Note

yeah i really dont know...

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Courtney

well damn i know its a linkin park song

Posted 16 Years Ago

Fantasyfairy

Would be OK if it wasn't a Linkin Park song.

Posted 16 Years Ago

An owl on the moon

The cry of so many hearts, and you expressed it so creatively, almost musically the question plays a beat behind your poem interspersed. Amazing!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Courtney

bordom..

Posted 16 Years Ago

chris' girlfriend

thats creative!!

Posted 16 Years Ago

mick weller

I'm left wondering just exactly what it is that you'd be prepared to give away - and 'all ' of it...
kinda graphic art than poetry I feel--- I like the 'shouting' in there though
One big question mark at the end could add impact (?) - maybe just to clear up any uncertainty with the reader (?)
but it's good to rant now and again - gets 'it' out of the system
I'd like to see this piece make a face - as I think it says more graphically fo'sure