HAHA I laugh at you cuz your so ridiculous!

It's Just a ripple in time

It's just a tear drop of the fire

To take up with the big man

cuz you are such a liar

The lips your speaking with

the tognue you should bite

Your teeth gana get knocked out

You better hold on and hold on tight

 

Your so pathetic

your such a waste of time and space

your so rediculous

you make me laugh in your face

Black and blue will get you now

bite the lip and you'll go down

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jock Engelman]

i love this work, but be aware of your word spelling and structure. keep writing please :D

[luna11]

I like this poem. :D
You spelt ridiculous wrong, though.
xx