True To You

I was walking down on 50^th Avenue

Laughin’ and a’trippin’ up till I saw you

You looked at him beside me and I saw you knew

That I hadn’t been true to you

 

When your eyes gazed at me they were like flints of steel

My heart fell down, I lost my crown, I didn’t feel real

My mind went blank; I almost forgot I had to appeal

For I hadn’t been true to you

 

Oh baby, can’t you see

I’ll leave him, if you ask me

To be true, to my boo

In the end I just want you

 

My leaden tongue can’t seem to say the words I feel

My eyes fill with tears to which I must now yield

There are waves of regret running from my head to my heel

‘Cuz I hadn’t been true to you

 

Oh baby, can’t you see

I’ll leave him, if you ask me

To be true, to my boo

In the end I just want-

 

To prove to you now

That I always shall

From here on

Be faithful to you

 

Few years later, not gonna be feeling any rue

Walking down the aisle, people watching from the pews

As we kiss and people cheer, I’m gonna be glad

That I chose to be true to you

 

Oh baby, can’t you see

I’ll leave him, if you ask me

To be true, to my boo

In the end I just want you

 

Oh baby, can’t you see

I’ll leave him, if you ask me

To be true, to my boo

In the end I just want you

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

this is interesting...
it brings the scene into my mind
like i am standing just the other side of the road and seeing it happen
that is i can see it, but i cant feel what you feeling
but i am sure that your full piece will do that
i off to check it out now
^-^

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Deep....I could actually see the seen in my mind. Short and sweet with an impact. I like this piece.

[Catrinka]

This is great! I'm going to check out the rest of it...

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. Great job.