Why Hurt?

Why do I hurt?

Why am I hurt?

Why does this hurt?

I lashed out, hurting others.

Filled with a dark spirit; able to kill.

Filled with a dark past.

Filled with me.

When I'm hurting you, I'm hurting me.

I'm hurting because you're hurting.

It hurts that you don't need me.

I'm hurt that I drove you away from me.

I drove away what I need most.

I need you.

But...you don't need me.

and that hurts.

Ultimately, in hurting you, I hurt myself.

I'm hurt.

Reviews

[deeps]

When I'm hurting you, I'm hurting me.
I'm hurting because you're hurting.
It hurts that you don't need me.
I'm hurt that I drove you away from me.

Wow! These lines just say it all.
I can really relate to this write as well.
Your stuff is awesome I am enjoyiung these writes.

[Kendall Edison]

I LOOOOOOVE this... like no really!

[Rhine Wolf]

You have gotten your point across nice and clearly. i find the best way to release hurt and anger is through poetry, well done!!

Blessed be,
Fallon

[Katie L]

i love it

[Emmie]

This is a pretty strong piece. It's almost, sort of like, your just a big power struggle of mind and heart. This makes the poem really intense. I loved it! =)