Too Much

Too many emotions.

I'm lost in them.

Would give my soul to be stripped of them.

The pain, I would exchange for numbness.

It's easier to be numb.

Unable to feel, unable to react.

Heart as cold as ice.

Closed off from the world.

Closed of from myself.

Would suffer a million deaths to be invisible.

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

my tears are cold against me cheeks, perhaps people have always been right all along?
I think that sometimes, but then I think well if that were the case, would even be there, warm cold or whatever.
Numbness is nice, well you'd think is was.. Until it wears off, then you think wow, where the hell did that come from, ouchie, no I don't think anyone should ever forget what pain feels like, cause its always going to come around at some point or another, so you got to be ready... Meh, thats my story in any case, there is no smooth sailing.
A write I think many can relate to.

[deeps]

I like this write alot
i can feel this and the emotions just pour out.
well written

[Raj Narayan]

I liked the last line. Good.

[The Devil's Own B***h]

You just described the feelings i have just about every day of my life. To be numb is so much easier than feeling the constant pain of reality. This is such a cry for freedom of pain put so beautifully in the form of a poem.

Brilliant write!!!

Josie

[Egan]

I love you

[nocturnalbeast]

Thanx!