To: My Little Sister [[African Gumdrop]]--->A.K.A Dreads NiyaBOO!

To: My Little Sister [[African Gumdrop]]--->A.K.A Dreads NiyaBOO!

A Poem by nocturnalbeast

I see a light in you.
It's so beautiful, so rare.
You have so many abilities.
So many talents.
They're encapsulated in a wooden box.
Sealed shut.
I had a dream that me and Briona danced around your box.
Spinned, Swirled, and Twirled.
We danced so hard with so much energy, so much passion.
Red and Yellow burst from my fingertips....and Purple and Green from Briona's.
The lights grazed the box, and the seams began to crack.
I could feel your energy pressing against the box.
[[Briona felt it too..]]
We looked at eachother and began to dance harder; lights gleaming from our hearts,
Freedom bleeding from our souls.
The top of the box lifted and you rose to the sky
With rainbows pouring from your eye sockets
and sprinkles of rainbow dust falling from eye lashes.
So free. So beautiful.
[[Take our hands
We'll help.]]!!

© 2008 nocturnalbeast


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Such a passion building throughout this poem. It's beautiful to see the constant incouragement that you have expressed in this poem. So so stunning!!!!!!

Well done on a brilliant piece.

Josie

Posted 16 Years Ago


Dalaina- Thank u so much!!!.
Misty- U came at the most perfect time with these comments. [[really]].
I've been feeling really bad lately...and haven't felt like writing. [[That feeling is soooo gone.!]]


Posted 16 Years Ago


I loved reading this! Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is so beautiful, so heartwrenching. There's a different kind of passion in this, deeper than hate or even love. I really love the voice...so wounded, yet so hopeful, yearning. The pain this speaks of could crush you, but better men find wings to rise above, this writing tells me. This is clearly written by a better man.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 7, 2008

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nocturnalbeast
nocturnalbeast

Detroit, MI



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I really don't know..... I'm kindda confused about myself right now.... But...whoever is reading this....I LOVE U!. [[really]]. I love acting. [[Theatre is my life]] singing. [[harmonizing]] dancing. .. more..

Writing
Ha! Ha!

A Poem by nocturnalbeast