the who of you

I miss the light of the moon kissing your body as your voice fills the silence of the room

I miss the warmth of your lips
The wet from every kiss
The soft smacks that fill the silence of the room

I miss the soft of your skin
Getting lost in the learning of your curves
The science of where you start
The apex before you end
Joys found always in learning the beauty of your sin


I get lost in the thought of you
Your blinding smile
And the light of your eyes


The morning kiss hello
The last kiss good-night

Every morning next to you; life begins
Every good-night is where it ends

I love loving you
Dancing in tangled and twisted circles time and time again



How close is close enough
Maybe where we become unsure of where you begin and I end


I am lost in the who of you
My rising sun, my midnight star
I love you whoever you are

Reviews

[R.M.C]

A lovely piece. You capture the small pleasures couples enjoy in your own unique and expressive way. I especially love the way it builds up to the very last line; you depict the ways in which they're remembered and what you love about them, and then at the end, you simply say "I love you whoever you are" because you know you already love them and that its not going to change; when you find true love, you love the person before you even fully get to know them because your soul calls to theirs and vice versa. Exquisite.

[nocool]

ty dude...

[R.M.C]

I'm not really familiar with text language - I'm a bit old school and prefer full words :) does ty mean thank you?

[nocool]

it does ... yes.

[R.M.C]

:) then you're welcome.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

very poemetic and sweet, rich in passion and romance. very good. would love to see a story.

[nocool]

much thanks.
I will get one at some point.