times and seasons

Autumn leaves sprinkle like rain to the wanting ground
Yellow,
gold,
hues of red,
like floating feathers they fall to their forever bed

Sleeping tress let go of their singing leaves
As they rest on the forever bed
for their forever sleep

Orion’s sky shines down from heaven’s eye
the warmth of lips have been chased away
so it is,
jackfrost and his frosty kiss
freeze the summer tears of springs eye

For every time there is a season,
and for every day there is a night
for every spring there is a fall
And approaches
a time when we bid the year farewell as we dim it’s light
and we bid a good-bye to it all

Reviews

[R.M.C]

Wonderful piece. Everything is beautifully written, right down to the leaves falling. I love all of the Similes used to en capture seasons and I really love the personification of trees ("sleeping trees let go of their singing leaves") as they drift off into a deep slumber in Fall that will last through the winter. A great write.

[McBear]

Beautiful imagery. I drowned in the beautiful wording! Good job.

[Caitlin Rogers]

I loved the imagery. I can imagine every single thing that is happening. Well done.

[DirectTangent]

I enjoyed reading this. Nice imagery, skilled composition, creative use of metaphor. Speaks to the beauty of the natural flow of things.
Thank you for this.

[nocool]

thanks for that man..

[Xander West]

I like the imagery of your work. I enjoy reading and feeling the flow, how you moved the words into a picture creating art with stroke of keys. I hope to read more of you work.

[nocool]

Thanks man..

[sandman]

interesting vision and approach

[nocool]

Thank you..