Mirror Mirror

 

Mirror mirror on the wall!

Musing about symmetry!

Chase truths reflection screaming!

You think you know me!

You know everything!

Knowing nothing!

I think you insane!

Breath!

I am not a mirror reflecting you!

Stop copying me!

 

Now whisper...

Flee the mirror...

Chasing your reflection...

Ponder your next thoughts...

Directed at the mirror...

I can hear you laughing at me...

But I'll say one thing...

Know thine enemy...

Know thyself...

I know exactly what I'll say...

 Don't want to scream at the wall...

Find a mirror...

 

Scream!!

You think you know me!

You know everything!

Knowing nothing!

I think you insane!

Breath!

I am not a mirror reflecting you!

Stop copying me!

Flee!!

 

Whisper... 

 You shouldn't laugh at me...

I have sharp pencil...

And a burning cigarrette...

My precious...

You don't even know me...

Nobody...

The mutant beast...

Stalking shadows on the wall...

I killed my evil twin...

What's that say about me?

 

Stop laughing at me!

You think you know me!

You know everything!

Knowing nothing!

I think you insane!

Breath!

I am not a mirror reflecting you

Stop copying me!

!

 

 

Reviews

[DeAn]

To truly know thyself is to truly know thine enemy, for within the mind lies the truth we think we know,
yet our feet carry us to places we should never go all the while running from the reality we refuse to see.

am I me?

or just another part of you!

my delimma and your demise,
this wickedness that cast a shadow over my eyes,
for tho we see thru a mirror darkly,
but then face to face,
what shall I say?

father please forgive them for they know not what they do?

yet the man in the mirror sceams defiantly that we do!

ponder the riddles of the ages while talking to the man in the mirror and soon you will find you have lost your mind and it only goes in stages.

thoughts to consider while smashing your mirror. :)

great job!

l8r g8r
-Tao

[antdoggy]

I LOVE THE STORYLINE AND THE CONSIST OF THE FACT THE THE PERSON LOOKING IN THE MIRROR IS MOCKING THEMSELF...WISH IS EXCELLENCE....AND THE STORY IN EXACTLY TO THE POINT....WHICH IS EYECANDY FOR THE READERS!!!

[ZeeArsonist]

how excellent is this?! i felt like alice tumbling down the rabbit hole! up is dow, reflections not right! brilliant and thanks for sharing!

[Bubo]

I am not a mirror reflecting you

A great write, could feel sanity almost running through the tumbling words!
Really strong imagary too.

I killed my evil twin...

What's that say about me?

Stop laughing at me!


Such a realistic view on another angle of looking in the mirror.

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

this is crazy great... It has great flow.

[Joseph - Michael]

At first, I thought I was reading another "Snow White" until the talk back started. That was really quite impressive how you wrote it down. It's like facing your worst enemy of all time; Yourself


Anyway, I seriously enjoyed that, so it's all good...

[Constance]

Your mind is fascinating, the words it bends into a single piece, the myriad of emotions you can portray in only a few lines. Bravo!

[Tania Leigh]

An alarmingly intense glimpse into the mirror.....the punctuation allowed for drama and also for a fast pace...very intense, indeed!

[JC Fox]

What an interesting piece, I loved the weirdness of it, and yes I found it weird but I like weird! Thanks for sharing!

[PhoeniX]

how scary. i could see everything unfolding as i read this through. imagery and word placement was good. you just gave me an idea for my next write with this. thank you!

[Marie]

Very nice.