Haiku stream

Void within without

Simple mind perceiving lies

Work thru the secret

 

Sudoku to see

Complex surrounding puzzle

True reality

 

Light velocity

Hyperdimensional form

Matrix of strings sings

 

Into existence

Mass, charge, spin, forces within

White noise, static, havoc!

 

Comprehend haiku

Calligraphy, zen with me

Tao lucidity

 

Uncertain precept

Following logically

The battle begins

 

Silent murder need

Samurai philosophy

Assassins creed cry!

 

Warrior facing

An uncertain enemy

Allows no mercy

 

Knowing only me

No brakes, no steering, I drive

Driven to exceed

 

Bend the bars with me

Together seek the one key

Open mindbox free

 

Hello! Good morning!

Welcome to reality!

No cage, box, or key!

 

Emotional seeds

Intellectual beliefs

Spiritual hearts

 

Surrounded by weeds

The secretheart garden starts

With the seeds I feed

 

Who planted the weeds?

Responsibility is

Free will given me

 

What could we achieve?

If together we all weed

Humanities dreams

 

Species destiny

Perhaps true world wide peace

Maybe I'm crazy

 

Remember each day

The true choices we all face

In our secret space

 

Garden of the heart

Where the dreamseeds sown twine roots

Into the bedrock

 

Reaching to the sky

Heartroots take hold of the stars

How far can we go?

 

If we can believe

It is up to you and me

Haiku streaming

 

Repeating silence

Echoes in your memory

Lyrics in your head

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

According to google haiku are meant to have a 5/7/5 count so thats what I used. I am aware that I have used some of these concept's already, but the challenge was in seeing If I could construct a series of stand alone haiku's that would encompass these ideas. I leave it to you to decide if I have succeeded.

Reviews

[Constance]

This is nice. I love the way that each could indeed stand alone, but they flow into one another beautifully. FOr some reason this one strikes the deepest chord in me, though many do strike me.
"Who planted the weeds?

Responsibility is

Free will given me".
Very true, and we all plant a few of our own weeds, have the misfortune of having a few planted by others.

[sandra Counts]

Hi- I met you at Gospel tabernacle Church parking lot a week ago and you shared this webpage with me so I could see your writing. I read the haiku stream several times to feel the emotion there. I like the way it seems to go from angst/stress/turmoil to seeds that grow deep to a strong place. Then it reaches to the sky with feelings of breaking out and freedom. It reminds me of what a relationship with Christ can do for a lost and searching soul. Thank you for sharing this with me.
Sandra

[antdoggy]

I Give this a 85for creatively...it not a 10 bcuz it a little too long...but a great storyline!!!

[ZeeArsonist]

i will be honest, the last is my absolute favorite. the cheese that stood alone. love it!

[Karen Raquepo]

Very original in style and it's penned well. Nice poem!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow.....wow. This is just amazing and every haiku flowed wonderfully. Awesome job!!!

Heather

[Jillian Alexis]

Bravo. You certainly have mastered the art of writing Haidus. This is very original and creative. Very well penned my friend...Hugz...Jillian

[Joseph - Michael]

I'm fimilar with the haiku and you sure used it well, but it doesn't have to be used for prose poems. I find that kind of hard to read. Maybe it would've been better if you use only just at least five haiku altogether, then it would be easier to read. But, hey, that's just me

Anyway, it's all good here...

[Tania Leigh]

I would say you met the challenge well, as they do in fact stand alone, or as one.
Nice job :-)

[Marie]

Nice job. I may have to try this myself.