Moonlight dress

Frozen river

Gloomy night,

fresh air...

Red hair, soft lips

The goddess 

in a moonlight dress...

She was sitting by the river

whispering so gently

I started to shiver...

Is this just a dream,

Or reality that I can keep!?

I woke up...

At night,

when wind blows,

I can still hear 

her words

whispering to me

with her

velvet voice;

"Can you sleep, while your dreams are awake!?"

Author's Note

please ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[DayDreamer]

nice words, sounds pretty and whimsical and I like the way you've structured it :)

[Noah William]

Thank you so much for this review it means a lot how you noticed the structure of a poem :)