Failure

Traveling on endless wasteland 

under pouring rain

Reaching for non existent end

submerged in my blood 

from wide open wounds

I'm trying.

trying

Is that a right word for what I'm really doing?

Or is it just another 

failure?

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

submerged in my blood
from wide open wounds.
A nice write.

[Noah William]

Thank you so much for your review!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[dunnia]

very nice poem.... hopefully you get what it is you want

[Noah William]

Thank you! I hope I will too :)