Dreams

Dreams made of glass turned into stones 

roughly breaking weightless shackles

Forces of the damned traveling endlessly

through the limpid sky

all alone

Caducity braids its golden threads 

trying to conceal what mind sees 

Suddenly the sun breaks through the cracks

collecting hidden silent pleas 

Shattering the thick layers of dark

consuming what might have been

and making it

real

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Noah, come, walk with me. This poem, it is smokey. By that I mean it swirls about the edges of rational thought, like when you smoke and play guitar. For example, dreams can be fragile, like glass but turning them into stone, into reality is difficult; as difficult as making the rational leap from dream to glass to stone. As you strum the next chord, I sip my coffee and wonder, what are these forces of the damned that travel endlessly alone through a limpid sky? Could one be the force of rationality that always seems to end our reverie so soon... too soon? There are few golden threads in my caducitic eyes as I see them in my mind. But as the last note dies away, I glance away and there, as you say, is the sun and my thick darkness of understanding is shattered by the last... "making it real." Bravo!

[Noah William]

Your words are penetrating my soul as you were a part of my mind- as we truly are walking side by side. Your understanding of this poem is breathtaking and your reviews are always delightful.
Thank you, my friend!

-Noah-

[isus]

zanimljivo .

[beautiful dreamer]

this is so beautiful! i was hanging on every word. and i reread it twice! keep writing :)

[Noah William]

Thank you so much for your review!
It's been an honour to hear that you reread it twice :) read moreThank you so much for your review!
It's been an honour to hear that you reread it twice :)
I'll never stop writing :)
- Noah -

[Kelsey]

This is so beautifully penned. Every word really left me wanting more. It felt like poetry at its finest. Not only were your words lovely, but the presentation and setup of the poem were lovely, as well. Wonderful job. x

[Noah William]

Thank you for your insightful review! It inspires me to write more.

-Noah-