Zero

Coldness.
Tears.
Us.
Broken glass.
Dark.
Sorrow.
We.
Emptiness.
Anger.
Me.

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Yep, that pretty much sums it up.. zero, naught, nil, 0. This is so terse we could call it mathematical poetry. Let the words stand for themselves and whatever the reader thinks they mean. I assume the sequence is important, correct? I mean, you can't read them out of order and get the same message, can you? Just curious...

[Noah William]

The sequence in this case is really important. Coldness and tears is something only two of us can see/feel; broken glass, dark and sorrow is something us AND others can see and it's provoked by the first part; emptiness and anger I feel are consequences of the previous two. So yeah, you can't read it out of order.
Thank you for your exquisite review!

-Noah-

[dunnia]

short but very deep

[Noah William]

Thank you for your review!

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such a deep write, so much emotion

[Noah William]

Thank you for your lovely review!