My saviour

It's a poem about how I finally found my salvation

I was on the ground

drowning in my flood of tears,

held tight by my own demons

surrounded by eternal dark,

until she came into my life.

She brought the light,

warmth, passion, and love.

Reviews

[dunnia]

aww this is so sweet and heart warming thinkiing that love can bring this much happiness to one person......your girlfriend is very lucky

[Noah William]

She is very happy :) I'm happy too that I have her. Don't know what I would do without her :) Loving her and get love from her are the most beautiful things that happen to me lately :)

- Noah -

[dunnia]

awww you guys are sooo cute >.< i hope u get ur happy ending my wishes to you.......you cheesy couple lol

[Noah William]

Thank you for your kind wishes :) Being cheesy it's awesome, my gf and me call that "being salamy", which makes it even more awesome :)

- Noah -

[dunnia]

you guys are too cute and funny :)

[Noah William]

We love to laugh, and we love life :) I think smile is the best cure we have. When life is hard just put your smile on, even when you think it's impossible :)

[dunnia]

great advice....though it really does seem impossible sometimes, at least you have someone worth smiling for and thats whats important,the only love in my life is my kitty luner hes adorable

[zainul]

This is a wonderful write
It makes me happy to know that a saviour is around to save an individual from the demons.
I can feel the light,warmth, passion, and love that was brought by your saviour.

[Noah William]

Thank you so much for this review!

Only love can save us from our own demons. We have to be sorrunded with people who care about us, so we can get strength to move on. 'Cause worst thing we can do is not to get up when life our someone knock us down.

[zainul]

You are very welcome,Noah!

I agree with you that only love can save us from our own demons.
I adore your realization that we have to be sorrunded with people who care about us, so we can get strength to move on.
The trust for each other is thus very important.
We can strengthen our relationship with persons we trust and thus we can depend upon each other.
Thanks for sharing your lovely feelings.

[Noah William]

You are very welcome!

Without trust and love we don't have nothing. Specialy if we don't trust ourselves. It's hard to be in this world on our own. The main reason is the fact that this world changed a lot (in a bad way). People lost main values, and that's very sad. Only we have left is faith, hope and love, and love doesn't make the world go round, it makes the ride worthwhile.

- Noah -

[Ina Waltz]

This poem is the most beautiful gift you could give me, beside your heart of course.
You saved me in all the ways someone can be saved and you showed me that love has no limits. I will forever be grateful to you for that.

[Noah William]

Baby you are the most beautiful thing that happen to me. Our love grow stronger every day, and every time I'm beside you I feel so complete. Thank you for being so amazing, and thank you for loving me, cuz I love you more and more every day. Forever yours

- Noah -