Subtle

Subtle

A Poem by not_today
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um um um um um um um um what

"
We were sorted based off of what we read
Of course you read the same thing I did
Because that's just life
You're one of the few people I would talk to in our group
I'm about to start talking
And you start the conversation
Excuse me-
Wha-
How-
Who-
Why
You start talking to anyone listening
I'll always listen to you
You say something about what he just did
I reply with a joke
All of my social abilities revolve around humor
You laugh
I've never heard that laugh from you
I've heard you laugh with your friends
It's loud
But still amazing
This laugh
It was subtle
But it lasted a while
Like you meant it
You look up halfway
To see me laughing with you
The subtle eye contact
Made me so happy
I haven't felt this happy in so long
Because you held my gaze
For a little longer than normal
They wave their hands between our eyes
Hello?
Snap back to reality
Oh there goes gravity
We look at them for a second and laugh
But we end up making more eye contact
As I lean against the wall behind me
Your eyes go wide
I just leaned against the chalkboard
I erased some of the writing
I start to laugh
And you laugh the new laugh
That I'd never heard until today
That I've only heard you use
With me
It's like that beautiful laugh was assigned to me
And I couldn't ask for a better one
It's sweet
Kind of loud
Kind of quiet
And subtle

© 2018 not_today


Charlie
Fly the plane

Author's Note

not_today
yeah okay

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It's like that beautiful laugh was assigned to me
And I couldn't ask for a better one
It's sweet
Kind of loud
Kind of quiet
And subtle

sORT OF SUBTLE AND PERFECT AND REAL- but seriously dude these lines made me actually full on sigh. Gah. It's so cheesy and yet I know you mean it 100% gah I love this sm

Posted 6 Years Ago



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