Into a sea of clouds

Looking up,
seeing the clouds
pass me by...

I longed to dive,
into, the depths
of the air;
into the emptiness
of the skies,
to seemingly fly.
                          And watch the clouds stay still...

Falling for illusions
of a voiceless sky,
the wind kissing my face,
the few seconds
compare, 

to eternity.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

This is ethereal in its beauty...splendid descriptions...and your emotions on how you felt was on par. Wonderful poetry.

[Juan de Rajah]

Thank you very much Mr. DeValle.

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome, Jaun...it was a pleasure of mine reading your wonderful poetry.