I, Rarely

I, Rarely

A Poem by nj coleman
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Saturday morning thinking about things I don’t understand

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I rarely understand
or, in any case,
I am the last to understand 
 
a stream flows for the first time, trickling up from earth 
air, hushed in the still of night, 
then puff, a breeze 
 
O' to witness that glorious space in time 
a river magically unfolds, alive
wind, from nothing, begins to blow
a flame arises, unbidden
a universe bangs big
 
Or we fall in love 
for the first time.
All over again.
 

© 2025 nj coleman


Author's Note

nj coleman
woke up thinking about how much in life I just don't understand

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I think we can all make our own list. What I really love is your closing line. Quite profound and beautiful.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nj coleman

1 Week Ago

Thank you Kelly! I was a little unsure about that last line so thank you!!! Neil
I liked the thoughts and wishes in the poetry. Life is a twisted dance. We must try to win. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nj coleman

1 Week Ago

Thank you Coyote. Your review is much appreciated!

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Added on March 22, 2025
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