This is my view

All of my work is personal to me and I want to put this poem on first just to say Everyone has their own ideas about life and no one is right or wrong

We are all human

It's not hard to see

But to know it and feel it

Is to set your self free

Don't be held back

By someone elses view

Views are not answers

And not always true

The meaning of life

Though complex is not hidden

Just covered up by

All the truthes we are given

The circle of life

Is a continuas line

In wich all things are equil

And this view is mine

Author's Note

I would love to know what you thought of this. Good or bad

Reviews

[Mari ana biossat]

I like it very much. The message is clear. I like the meter you used. It is easy to read and flows. Well done....Mari Ana.

[noname22]

Great, gets me thinking. Good message

[Jeremy Lester]

Good peace with a solid point. Nice flow and I enjoyed the ending, with it being your view. Solid reinforcement of the message. One thing though, did you mean to spell out "equil" in the second to last line?

[Poetic Beauty]

Try to live up to others expectations doesnt always work. Be who you are and you will be set free. Be the best "you" you can be. This is what this piece says to me.

[Keith]

Oh, so much the truth. I enjoyed this read. Thank you for sharing,

Just a few spelling errors:
All the truthes (truths) we are given
Is a continuas (continuous) line
In wich (which) all things are equil (equal)

whoa! this one is really amazing. : )

[0AudreyClaire0]

Wow, this is great. Fantastic message and it flows incredibly. You did a great job. :)
-Aud