Let me?

A time of misfortune.

If I could take you away from it all, would you let me?

If I could create my imagination a reality and take you with me, let me?

A blanket of wishes, cultivating a dream,

A simple request, have you right here next to me, so let me?

I'd sell my soul to a demon and you don't need to thank me,

Just to have you with me, like ecstasy, will you let me?

I won't promise you diamonds, roses daily or an essence of life.

Because it's a breath you take from me, it saved me that night,

A secret moment in the past you stole,

A memory of a girl, I wished to hold..

You saved it and played it a reality in screen,

A movie of us, when you stole my organs from me..

So forgive me for not being cliché to say heart..

But even before I met you, the ruby muscle was yours from the start.

Author's Note

a.r.w

Reviews

[Piper Sullivan]

Aww, this is pretty good! A pretty universal concept and yet I didn't find it boring on contrite (which is funny that you chose not to mention 'heart' throughout!) For some reason though, "A movie of us, when you stole my organs from me.." kind of rubbed me the wrong way. I think 'organ' threw me. Just a personal word choice conflict, I guess. Other than that, nicely done.

[Xfaerie corpseX]

aww...well if it was abt me, id let you.

very well written

Very sweet..


Needless to say i LOVED it1!


Its awesome