The Proposal

There in her eyes,

Stood out the love.

Flying, came the ardent desire in him,

To make her, his.

The floor was kissed by his knee,

Her hand, by his lips.

The velvet grazed his fingers,

Words tumbled out his lips.

Words of ;

Love,

Passion.

She,with her:

Glazed eyes,

Quivering lips,

Fluttering heart.

As the diamond blinded ;

Not just the eyes,

But the dainty heart.

Him, with his emotional proposal,

Her , with her teary-eyed acceptance.

Two hearts,

Two souls,

United.

Slipped;

The ring through her fingers,

Tears off her eyes.

Love

Warmth

Passion

Engulfed them.

For,

It was,

The Proposal.

Author's Note

Ignore the punctuation please.

Reviews

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

This is such a beautiful, emotional and romantic poem. The imagery is fantastic, the mood soft and the scene heart touching. Remarkable poem! :)

[Nivedithaa Ramaswami]

Thank you so much! :)

Your words inspire me to write more.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

very beautiful and sweet......
truly captured the moment.....
thank you for sharing!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Nivedithaa Ramaswami]

Thank you Pushkar, it means a lot to me! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.............keep writing!!! :) :)

[Gaston Villanueva]

I liked the tone of this and nice use of imagery
Well done

[Nivedithaa Ramaswami]

Thank You Gaston :)