For your eyes

For my someone special

I can see lot of life in you
I can see what I want to
I can see what you cant
Winter monsoon summer
Well either every weather
Come here sit with me
You make everything look better
When the water pours
Lets then get wet
Lets get old together
Let the sun set
Let life be simple
Let me love you
It aint a home
If it aint with you

Nivedita...

Reviews

[Khushi]

A very romantic and sweet poem. I love the last two lines :)

[Sami Khalil]

Let the sun set
Let life be simple
Let me love you

[Vidya Bacchus]

A most heartfelt piece,a true delight to read:)

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)............

[Rose of many colours]

lovely piece .It can be painted on a canvas and put up on a wall for an house warming gift. it fits in well for a friend .lover, family member...great write and expression

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Keep doing the good work...more than anything else...listen to your heart and pen them down...that's the best part of poetry!