wading.

 my brain was scattered 
in silence
thrown in waves
crashing against the rocks
a jagged sound
in silence
a desperate emptiness
caused by the fading of the water
back and forth
standing on the shore
waiting to get sucked in
watch the sea rush past
as my feet are strangled in sand
i was searching for silence
but i can't keep my mouth closed.

Reviews

[Jessie]

This was really good, and very descriptive. The part where you said, 'my feet are strangled in sand'. That was awesomly written.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Sounds like expression is bursting forth. Very clever thanks.