A Poet's Disappointment

when i feel its worthless!

(11:30 pm)

I sit on my bed,

Blood boiling red.

Emotions controlling my hand,

Words scattered like sand.

My pen weaving magic,

Whether its comic or tragic….

I look at my hands, with wonder:

Pride resonating within, like thunder!

 

(7:30 am)

'Good morning'

All my alarms ring.

'My poem', I sigh, I breathe,

Smelling the ink like a wreath.

I read a line - it feels so intense…

Slowly I realize: now it makes no sense.

Pride bursts, like a bubble,

'It's still good', I mumble.

 

(6:00 pm)

The setting sun, a crimson haze,

Poem in hand, I sit in a daze.

Fleeing the dark are - little birds,

Flying in my head are -a jumble of words.

'Feel no offense',

Says my mind, 'Its nonsense'.

I look at my hands, I heave:

Disappointment swelling within - I grieve.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

comments please....

Reviews

[vspjaguar]

Wow! really nice description.This exactly how I feel too.A sudden outburst of emotions and before I know the pen starts weaving its magic.This is how all the poets feel I guess.I was actually thinking of writing something similar to this.Thanks for bringing out a poet's feeling.

[The Dreamer]

welcome :D and thanks for your review. yes it s as if your hand n' your pen is moving on its own... but i didnt think that all poets feel this disappointment. :)

[vspjaguar]

As a beginner everyone feel the same I guess :)

[The Dreamer]

true.

[imdvader]

I feel the same way too.. XD

[The Dreamer]

:)

[rnuff]

Oh wow i really enjoyed this write. love the emotions put into it.

[The Dreamer]

thank you :)

[insight]

my text seems to be mashing together, is it this site glitching?

[insight]

You love poetry I think,

[The Dreamer]

i love to write :)

[PoeticVandal]

How i feel everytime im writing my poems....
EVERY SINGLE TIIIIIIMMMMME.
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH.....

[The Dreamer]

REALLY???? :D i was starting to think that i am the only one who feels this way! m' glad that you could relate to it :) - it sucks actually - the disappointment and i was starting to thin kthat this is a disappointment too :P thank you :)